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Re: [Rift] Final pass on readability/normative ...

Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> Thu, 19 December 2019 09:21 UTC

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From: Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com>
Date: Thu, 19 Dec 2019 10:20:19 +0100
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Subject: Re: [Rift] Final pass on readability/normative ...
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At this point in time we have some volunteers that polish
language/normative for

4.2.1 - 4.2.4

4.1

4.2.7

More volunteers would be welcome and are needed

--- tony





On Mon, Dec 9, 2019 at 7:21 AM Tony Przygienda <tonysietf@gmail.com> wrote:

> Only IESG outstanding reviewer's comments on the spec are @ this point in
> time improving general readability & fine comb on normative captions (plus
> going to format -v3 with pictures is up to me)
>
> I have some volunteers already that are starting on reading sections &
> polishing, I'm calling here for more ;-) If you'd like to review a section
> for readability & check normative language please contact me and I'll
> synchronize. Resolution is X.Y or X.Y.Z section with exception of small
> stuff like Examples maybe.
>
> On offer honorable mention in the acknowledgements section ;-)
>
> Idea would be to have a -10 (hopefully last one) with pictures & review
> incorporated before next IETF.
>
> thanks
>
> -- tony
>

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