[rtcweb] AD Review: draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-07

[Adam Roach <[e-mail]>]

I have completed my AD review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-07, and found 
only very minor editorial nits, which should be treated as normal last 
call comments.

Due to this document's close relationship with 
draft-ietf-payload-flexible-fec-scheme, I plan to wait until both 
documents are ready to progress before placing draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec 
into IETF Last Call.

Thanks to everyone who contributed to this document over its lifetime.

Nits follow.

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§2

Since this document uses "should" in non-normative sentences, please use the
RFC 8174 boilerplate.

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§3.3

    Some audio codecs, notably Opus [RFC6716] and AMR [RFC4867] support

Insert comma before "support"

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§4.1

    against individual losses, with minimal overhead.  Note that as
    indicated above the built-in Opus FEC only provides single-frame

Insert commas before and after the phrase "as indicated above"

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§7

    Implementations MAY support additional FEC mechanisms if desired,
    e.g.  [RFC5109].

- Change the comma after "desired" to a semicolon.
- Insert a comma after "e.g."

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