Re: [rtcweb] AD review: draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling

Justin Uberti <juberti@google.com> Sat, 03 November 2018 17:25 UTC

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From: Justin Uberti <juberti@google.com>
Date: Sat, 3 Nov 2018 10:24:52 -0700
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Subject: Re: [rtcweb] AD review: draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling
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https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling-11

On Fri, Nov 2, 2018 at 9:35 AM Justin Uberti <juberti@google.com>; wrote:

> See https://github.com/rtcweb-wg/ip-handling/pull/1
>
> Will send out a new version of the doc when the upload tool reopens.
>
> On Thu, Nov 1, 2018 at 6:15 PM Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com>; wrote:
>
>> This is my AD review for draft-ietf-rtcweb-ip-handling.
>>
>> I think this document is ready to go into IETF last call, modulo the ICE
>> citation issue. I plan to issue last call for this document at the same
>> time
>> as draft-ietf-rtcweb-security-arch and draft-ietf-rtcweb-security, so it
>> will
>> wait for those to become ready.
>>
>> I'm marking the document as "revised ID needed" pending the ICE reference
>> update.
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> [DISCUSS]
>>
>> Per the discussion around Cluster 238 dependencies, please reference RFC
>> 8445
>> instead of RFC 5245.
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> §2:
>>
>> Please update to match the RFC 8174 boilerplate.
>>
>>
>> ---------------------------------------------------------------------------
>>
>> §5.2:
>>
>>  >  Future versions of this document may define additional modes and/or
>>  >  update the recommended default modes.
>>
>> Suggest: "Future documents may...", as future consensus may be to update
>> rather
>> than replace this document.
>>
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