[RTG-DIR] Rtgdir early review of draft-ietf-idr-rpd-14

Himanshu Shah via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 31 January 2022 22:47 UTC

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Reviewer: Himanshu Shah
Review result: Ready

The document is written well.

I am glad it covers the the precedence of static routing policy  against the
signaled routing policy. It would be good if the example would use the explicit
address range to explain; (for example - 1.1.1.0 to 1.1.1.255),  in section
4.2.1.

I was asked to review version 14 and have not checked the delta between the
latest version 15.