Re: [sacm] REMINDER: WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp
Henk Birkholz <henk.birkholz@sit.fraunhofer.de> Thu, 25 July 2019 16:01 UTC
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Subject: Re: [sacm] REMINDER: WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp
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Hi *, sorry for being late. I did an extensive review and am in favor of moving this work forward. There are several tiny nits that are already in resolution. But I would like to provide the following distillate of which I think it is general structural issue: 1.) The use of terms seems to be under a surprising paradigm shift after section 3. "Agent", "Evaluator", etc. - the terms used until the end of section 3 seem to be in stark disconnected with the text starting with section 4. 2.) It is either ECP or EPCP :) Viele Grüße, Henk p.s. my apologies for being late, I actually though I submitted this on Fri already On 7/13/19 7:48 PM, Karen O'Donoghue wrote: > Folks, > > One week left on this last call… > > Thanks in advance for your review and comments! > Karen > > >> On Jun 27, 2019, at 4:34 PM, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org >> <mailto:odonoghue@isoc.org>> wrote: >> >> Folks, >> >> As discussed at our virtual interim on Tuesday, this begins a three >> week working group last call for: >> Endpoint Posture Collection Profile >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sacm-ecp/ >> >> Please reply to this email thread with an indication that you have >> read the document, any comments you may have, and your assessment of >> whether or not it is ready to proceed to publication. >> >> DEADLINE: Please reply by Friday 19 July 2019. >> >> Thanks! >> Karen and Chris >> >> _______________________________________________ >> sacm mailing list >> sacm@ietf.org <mailto:sacm@ietf.org> >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sacm > > > _______________________________________________ > sacm mailing list > sacm@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/sacm >
- [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Ira McDonald
- Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Adam Montville
- [sacm] REMINDER: WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Karen O'Donoghue
- Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay
- Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Jessica Fitzgerald-McKay
- Re: [sacm] WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Ira McDonald
- Re: [sacm] REMINDER: WGLC for draft-ietf-sacm-ecp Henk Birkholz