Re: [sacm] [sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid] Addressed comments from WGLC reviewers. (#13)

Alex Nelson <notifications@github.com> Thu, 25 July 2019 00:46 UTC

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> @@ -701,9 +670,9 @@ The following describes each child item of this group.
 
 - colloquial-version (index 45): A textual value for the software component's informal or colloquial version. Examples may include a year value, a major version number, or similar value that are used to identify a group of specific software component releases that are part of the same release/support cycle. This version can be the same through multiple releases of a software component, while the software-version specified in the concise-swid-tag group is much more specific and will change for each software component release. This version is intended to be used for string comparison only and is not intended to be used to determine if a specific value is earlier or later in a sequence.
 
-- description (index 46): A textual value that provides a detailed description of the software component. This value MAY be multiple sentences.
+- description (index 46): A textual value that provides a detailed description of the software component. This value MAY be multiple paragraphs seperated by CR LF characters as described by {{RFC5198}}.

Typo: separated.

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