Re: [savi] Alia Atlas' No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)

"Jun Bi" <junbi@tsinghua.edu.cn> Wed, 30 November 2016 06:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [savi] Alia Atlas' No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Alia,

Many thanks for your editorial comments !




Best Regards,

Jun Bi
 
From: Alia Atlas
Date: 2016-11-30 07:08
To: The IESG
CC: savi-chairs; draft-ietf-savi-mix; savi; jeanmichel.combes
Subject: [savi] Alia Atlas' No Objection on draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: (with COMMENT)
Alia Atlas has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-savi-mix-14: No Objection
 
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COMMENT:
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There are a number of acronyms that could use expansion or a reference
for the first time they are used (CGA, DAD are the 2 I caught).  This
will probably be caught by the RFC Editor, but help sooner might be
useful.
 
I'm fairly certain that Joel Halpern hasn't worked at Newbridge Networks
for quite a few years...
 
 
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