Re: [secdir] sector review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-rtp-usage-23

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Thu, 11 June 2015 08:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [secdir] sector review of draft-ietf-rtcweb-rtp-usage-23
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Hi

Snipping it down to a single thing I want to comment on.

Chris Inacio skrev den 2015-06-10 22:31:
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>
>> On Jun 10, 2015, at 8:49 AM, Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>; wrote:
>>
>>> page 23:
>>>
>>> “…supported by the RTCP Extended Reports (XR) framework
>>> [RFC3611][RFC6792].”   RFC3611 seems to be a full fledged reference
>>> while RFC6792 seems to just be text of “[RFC6792]”.
>>>
>>
>> They are both relevant references when understanding what RTCP XR are and what metrics one should consider.
>>
>> I propose to add a "see" so that the results become "... framework, see [RFC3611][RFC6792].
>>
>

> I think I was misunderstood, likely my fault. In the PDF, the
> RFC3611  seemed to be a true reference in the document; but RFC6792 did NOT seem
to be a reference. Maybe an issue in the actual XML, not the resulting
PDF/TXT. It may be nothing.

I haven't looked at the PDF generated at all before. It appear as a bug 
in the generation. Both these are xref items in the XML source. So it 
must be something when putting two xref after each other and no display 
text. I have reported this as a bug in the XML2RFC tracker.

cheers

Magnus Westerlund

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