Re: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11

["Jiankang Yao" <[e-mail]>]

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> 发件人: "Russ Housley via Datatracker" <[e-mail]>
> 发送时间: 2019-10-10 23:02:57 (星期四)
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> 主题: Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
> 
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review result: Has Issues
> 
> I reviewed this document as part of the Security Directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Security Area
> Directors.  Document authors, document editors, and WG chairs should
> treat these comments just like any other IETF Last Call comments.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-regext-bundling-registration-11
> Reviewer: Russ Housley
> Review Date: 2019-10-10
> IETF LC End Date: 2019-03-15
> IESG Telechat date: 2019-10-17
> 

Dear Russ Housley.
  Thanks a lot for your kind review.

> Summary: Has Issues
> 
> 
> Major Concerns:
> 
> The Abstract ans Section 1 say: "This is a non-standard proprietary
> extension." I understand that this is not a standards track document, so
> the "non-standard" part makes sense. 

yes, the WG decided that this document is informational.

> However, what is the point of
> publishing a "proprietary" extension as an RFC.  I would hope that
> interoperable implementations is the goal of publication.
> 

If the registry follows this document, both registry and its all registrars should follow this document.
Yes, interoperable implementation is very important.


> In Section 1, the use of "policy-wise" is unclear.  Is this registration
> policy or something else?
> 

How about 
 Policy-wise bundling --->
 Bundling based on policy


> 
> Minor Concerns:
> 
> None.
> 
> 
> Nits:
> 
> Section 1: s/label(LABEL)/label (LABEL)/
> - s/(V-tld);/(V-tld)./
> 

will update it.


Thanks a lot.

Jiankang Yao

> In addition, there are several places in the upper left corner of the
> title page:
>    Internet        Engineering     Task Force
> 
>