[secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-stir-passport-rcd-23

Vincent Roca via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 24 January 2023 13:56 UTC

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Reviewer: Vincent Roca
Review result: Ready

Hello,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate’s ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
like any other last call comments.

Summary: ready

My comments for version 21 were about a paragraph that has been removed altogether in this update.
I have no additional comment.

Regards,   Vincent