[sipcore] AD Review: draft-ietf-sipcore-locparam
Adam Roach <adam@nostrum.com> Mon, 13 January 2020 23:31 UTC
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Subject: [sipcore] AD Review: draft-ietf-sipcore-locparam
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This is my AD review of draft-ietf-sipcore-locparam. Thanks for the work that went into creating this document. I find no serious issues, and will be requesting IETF last call momentarily. I have included a small number of editorial suggestions below. Please treat them the same as you would any other IETF last call comments. --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §1: > These solutions don't preclude the use of UE provided location but Nit: "UE-provided" > "loc-src"."How the entity adding the locationValue to the header Nit: extra quotation mark before "How" --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §3: > All of them allow the UE to provide location information, however, Nit: "...information; however..." --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §3: > The "loc-src" parameter adds the location source generating the > locationValue to increase the trustworthiness of the location > information. Given that this mechanism doesn't add any authentication mechanisms, I expect that this assertion will raise some eyebrows with the security folks. From a security perspective, the information appears to be exactly as trustworthy as it is without this mechanism. I recommend that this sentence be struck, or changed to something more along the lines of: "...to allow recipients to make informed decisions about which of multiple values to use." --------------------------------------------------------------------------- §7: > As already stated in [RFC6442] securing the location hop- by-hop, Nit: "stated in [RFC6442], securing..." Nit: "...hop-by-hop..." > between the domains. If such trust domain is not given it is Nit: "...is not given, it is..." ---------------------------------------------------------------------------