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Jörgen Axell <jorgen.axell@ericsson.com> Wed, 04 December 2019 13:53 UTC

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From: Jörgen Axell <jorgen.axell@ericsson.com>
To: "A. Jean Mahoney" <mahoney@nostrum.com>, SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [sipcore] WGLC draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz
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A few nits:
1.2: Second bullet: maintainings-->maintaining
2.1.1: shouldn't "out of scope for" be "out of scope of"?
2.1.3: this specifications--> this specification
2.1.4: Authorization headerf-->Authorization header
2.2: end of first para, from there-->from where
2.3: same as 2.2
3: In BNF we have authz-server parameters. Shouldn't this be authz-server-value?
5.1: The figure belows show--> The figure below shows
below the figure: autentication-->authentication
5.2: The figure belows as above.

Regards,
Jörgen
-----Original Message-----
From: sipcore <sipcore-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of A. Jean Mahoney
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To: SIPCORE <sipcore@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz@ietf.org
Subject: [sipcore] WGLC draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz

Hi all,

Today starts the Working Group Last Call of draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz-06.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sipcore-sip-token-authnz/

The document has changed quite a bit since its predecessor went through WGLC.

Please review.  If you submitted feedback on a previous version, make sure that it was addressed and your questions answered.

Also appreciated would be any information on implementation plans.

WGLC ends Monday, Dec 16.

Thanks!

Jean

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