[sipcore] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-sipcore-rejected-08: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: [sipcore] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-sipcore-rejected-08: (with COMMENT)
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Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-sipcore-rejected-08: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-sipcore-rejected/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- 1) A couple of remarks on this sentence in Sec 3.1: “If an intermediary issues a 608 code and there are not indicators the calling party will use the contents of the Call-Info header field for malicious purposes (see Section 6), the intermediary MUST include a Call-Info header field in the response.” a) -> s/not/no/ b) Maybe also add a “that” as it would make this long easier to read: “If an intermediary issues a 608 code and there are no indicators that the calling party will use the contents of the Call-Info header field for malicious purposes (see Section 6), … c) After having read Section 6, I find this MUST rather strong. I was expecting more “concrete” instructions. I understand why you want to have a MUST here, but section 6 reads very much like a SHOULD. 2) Editorial: In this sentence in 3.4 I also think a “that” would help: “The degenerate case is the intermediary is the only element that understands the semantics of the 608 response code.“ 3) One more purely editorial comment: Short title is “Status Reject”, however, to be closer to the long title I would rather recommend something like “SIP Response Code for Rejected Calls”.
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