Re: [lamps] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on charter-ietf-lamps-04-01: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Thu, 05 December 2019 14:00 UTC

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: Mirja Kuehlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>, "Brockhaus, Hendrik" <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>
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Subject: Re: [lamps] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on charter-ietf-lamps-04-01: (with COMMENT)
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This change is now reflected in the 04-02 version of the charter.

Roman

> -----Original Message-----
> From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Mirja Kuehlewind
> Sent: Thursday, December 05, 2019 8:30 AM
> To: Brockhaus, Hendrik <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com>
> Cc: spasm@ietf.org; lamps-chairs@ietf.org; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Subject: Re: [lamps] Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on charter-ietf-lamps-
> 04-01: (with COMMENT)
> 
> Yes, I think that would be better. Thanks!
> 
> > On 5. Dec 2019, at 13:29, Brockhaus, Hendrik
> <hendrik.brockhaus@siemens.com> wrote:
> >
> >
> > Hi Mirja
> >
> > Thank you for your comment. You are perfectly right, the wording "theses
> environments" is quite vague.
> >
> >>
> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
> >> -
> >> COMMENT:
> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------
> >> -
> >>
> >> It's not fully clear to me what is meant with "these environments". I
> >> guess something with constraint devices...? Would be nice to be at
> >> least slightly more concrete to make the charter less ambiguous/less
> open-ended.
> >>
> >
> > As pointed out in the introduction of the I-D the CMP profile addresses
> machine-to-machine use cases and focusses on maximum automation of
> certificate management of such machine end entities as well as further
> communication of the involved PKI management entities.
> > -----------------------------snip-----------------------------
> > 2.  Introduction
> >
> >   This document specifies PKI management operations supporting machine-
> >   to-machine and IoT use cases.  The focus lies on maximum automation
> >   and interoperable implementation of all involved PKI entities from
> >   end entities (EE) through an optional Local Registration Authority
> >   (LRA) and the RA up to the CA. [...]
> > -----------------------------snip-----------------------------
> >
> > I am happy to change the proposed charter text accordingly to make it
> more clear. Would this wording be better?
> > -----------------------------snip-----------------------------
> > 3. The Certificate Management Protocol (CMP) is specified in RFC 4210,
> > and it offers a vast range of certificate management options.  CMP is
> > currently being used in many different industrial environments, but it
> > needs to be tailored to the specific needs of such machine-to-machine
> > scenarios and communication among PKI management entities.  The
> LAMPS
> > WG will develop a "lightweight" profile of CMP to more efficiently
> > support of these environments and better facilitate interoperable
> > implementation, while preserving cryptographic algorithm agility.  In
> > addition, necessary updates and clarifications to CMP will be
> > specified in a separate document.  This work will be coordinated with the
> LWIG WG.
> > -----------------------------snip-----------------------------
> >
> > Hendrik