Re: [stir] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03

Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 19 April 2018 01:58 UTC

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From: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>
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Subject: Re: [stir] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
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Brian, thanks for your review. I have entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa

> On Apr 2, 2018, at 10:36 PM, Brian Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>; wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review result: Ready
> 
> Gen-ART *Last Call* review of draft-ietf-stir-rph-03
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
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> Document: draft-ietf-stir-rph-03.txt
> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> Review Date: 2018-04-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-04-06
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-04-19
> 
> Summary: Ready
> --------
> 
> Comments:
> ---------
> This is a well written draft and I have no technical comments.
> 
> The draft says it extends RFC8225. Some people would say that needs
> an Updates: 8225 header.
> 
> Nits:
> -----
> 
> 8.1.  Normative References
> 
>   [I-D.ietf-stir-passport]
>              Wendt, C. and J. Peterson, "Personal Assertion Token
>              (PASSporT)", February 2017.
> 
> Is now RFC8225.
> 
>   [I-D.ietf-stir-rfc4474bis]
>              Peterson, J., Jennings, C., Rescorla, E., and C. Wendt,
>              "Authenticated Identity Management in the Session
>              Initiation Protocol (SIP)", February 2017.
> 
> Is now RFC8224.
> 
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