[TICTOC] Gwinn's comments on "draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-03.txt"

[Joseph Gwinn <[e-mail]>]

To the TicToc WG,

Attached find my comments on "draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-03.txt".

Comments consist of scattered clarifications.

Thanks,

Joe

Context:
On Mon, 05 Dec 2016 05:17:27 -0800, [e-mail] wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts 
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Timing over IP Connection and 
> Transfer of Clock of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : YANG Data Model for IEEE 1588v2
>         Authors         : Yuanlong Jiang
>                           Xian Liu
>                           Jinchun Xu
>                           Rodney Cummings
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-03.txt
> 	Pages           : 28
> 	Date            : 2016-12-05
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document defines a YANG data model for the configuration of
>    IEEE 1588-2008 devices and clocks, and also retrieval of the
>    configuration information, data set and running states of IEEE
>    1588-2008 clocks.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-03
> 
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> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-tictoc-1588v2-yang-03
> 
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