Re: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5468)

Masato Gosui <mgosui@yahoo-corp.jp> Tue, 21 August 2018 05:06 UTC

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From: Masato Gosui <mgosui@yahoo-corp.jp>
To: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>, Simon Josefsson <simon@josefsson.org>
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Thread-Topic: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5468)
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Subject: Re: [TLS] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC8422 (5468)
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If a new errata proposing the PDU change is needed, I gladly submit it.

--
Masato Gosui

    On Fri, Aug 17, 2018 at 10:25:47AM +0200, Simon Josefsson wrote:
    > I think “namedCurve” is better, it matches ASN.1 usage.
    
    So you want me to change the PDU to be "namedCurve" instead?
    
    -Ben
    
    > /Simon
    > 
    > > 17 aug. 2018 kl. 04:21 skrev RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>;:
    > > 
    > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8422,
    > > "Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier".
    > > 
    > > --------------------------------------
    > > You may review the report below and at:
    > > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid5468
    > > 
    > > --------------------------------------
    > > Type: Editorial
    > > Reported by: Masato Gosui <mgosui@yahoo-corp.jp>;
    > > 
    > > Section: 5.4
    > > 
    > > Original Text
    > > -------------
    > >   namedCurve: Specifies a recommended set of elliptic curve domain
    > > 
    > > Corrected Text
    > > --------------
    > >   namedcurve: Specifies a recommended set of elliptic curve domain
    > > 
    > > Notes
    > > -----
    > > This fixes mismatched names of the variable "namedcurve" in the "Structure of this message" paragraph.
    > > 
    > > Instructions:
    > > -------------
    > > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please
    > > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or
    > > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party  
    > > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. 
    > > 
    > > --------------------------------------
    > > RFC8422 (draft-ietf-tls-rfc4492bis-17)
    > > --------------------------------------
    > > Title               : Elliptic Curve Cryptography (ECC) Cipher Suites for Transport Layer Security (TLS) Versions 1.2 and Earlier
    > > Publication Date    : August 2018
    > > Author(s)           : Y. Nir, S. Josefsson, M. Pegourie-Gonnard
    > > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
    > > Source              : Transport Layer Security
    > > Area                : Security
    > > Stream              : IETF
    > > Verifying Party     : IESG
    >