Re: [TLS] I-D Action:draft-ietf-tls-dtls-heartbeat-00.txt

Adam Langley <agl@imperialviolet.org> Sat, 19 June 2010 00:08 UTC

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On Fri, Jun 18, 2010 at 4:15 PM,  <Internet-Drafts@ietf.org> wrote:
> The Heartbeat Extension provides a new protocol for TLS/DTLS allowing
> the usage of keep-alive functionality without performing a
> renegotiation and a basis for path maximum transmission unit (PMTU)
> discovery for DTLS.

> To perform PMTU discovery HeartbeatRequest messages containing

Missing a comma after 'discovery'

> HeartbeatRequest messages expires, this message is not longer

s/not/no/


The draft should name the extension; something like:

enum {
  heartbeat(TBD)
} ExtensionType;

The draft should also name the new record type:

enum {
  heartbeat(TBD)
} ContentType;



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