[TLS] non-editorial nit in esni-04

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Thu, 18 July 2019 20:00 UTC

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Subject: [TLS] non-editorial nit in esni-04
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Hiya,

Just spotted that:

   opaque zeros[ESNIKeys.padded_length - length(sni)];

should I guess now be:

   opaque zeros[ESNIKeys.padded_length - length(dns_name)];

And maybe s/PaddedServerNameList/PaddedDNSName/ would
also make sense.

Cheers,
S.

PS: sorry if this'd be easier to handle as a GH issue, or
if there's one for it already, but it's easier for me to
send mail than log in to GH;-)