Re: [Tsv-art] [Acme] TSV-ART review of draft-ietf-acme-acme-08

Thanks for the review, Martin.  I've posted responses in a PR, along with a
couple of other minor fixes:

https://github.com/ietf-wg-acme/acme/pull/357

On Tue, Nov 28, 2017 at 5:38 AM, Martin Stiemerling <mls.ietf@gmail.com>
wrote:

> Hi all,
>
> I've reviewed this document as part of the transport area review team's
> ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These comments were written
> primarily for the transport area directors, but are copied to the
> document's authors for their information and to allow them to address any
> issues raised. When done at the time of IETF Last Call, the authors should
> consider this review together with any other last-call comments they
> receive. Please always CC tsv-art@… if you reply to or forward this
> review.
>
> Summary:
> This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that should be
> fixed before publication.
>
> Editorials:
> - Abstract says "DISCLAIMER:...":
> This should be removed before publication or there is an issue with the
> intended status of Standards Track.
>
> - A nit, but: section 7.3.4 uses http instead of https in the example:
> "instance": "http://example.com/agreement/?token=W8Ih3PswD-8"
> All other instances use https.
>
>
> Technicals:
>
> - Section 8.2. Retrying challenges
> Any guidance on what "some times" means? At least in terms of a time
> scale, e.g., seconds, minutes, hours?
>
>
> Thanks for the clearly written document!
>
> Regards,
>
>   Martin Stiemerling
>
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