[Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-optimized-ir-08

Michael Tüxen via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 07 September 2021 19:57 UTC

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Subject: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-bess-evpn-optimized-ir-08

Reviewer: Michael Tüxen
Review result: Ready with Nits

This document has been reviewed as part of the transport area review team's
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I have not found issues related to transport.
However, I have two questions:

Section 5.2
What is the timer value for AR-REPLICATOR-activation-timer?
Are there dependencies to other parameters?

Section 6.2
What is the timer value for timer t?
Are there dependencies to other parameters?

Nits:

Abstract
Resolve BUM, resolve acronyms on first occurrence

Section 1
BUM resolved after being used.

Section 10
A implementation following -> An implementation following

[Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ietf-b… Michael Tüxen via Datatracker
Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ie… Rabadan, Jorge (Nokia - US/Mountain View)
Re: [Tsv-art] Tsvart last call review of draft-ie… tuexen