[Uta] mtp-tlsrpt-04 review

Jeremy Harris <jgh@wizmail.org> Wed, 05 April 2017 15:00 UTC

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The example in Appendix 9 implies that the Policy Domain
should correspond to the domain part of email addresses
attempted.  I think this should be made explicit in an
earlier section, eg. Section 3 ("A domain should") -
otherwise it could confused with the A-record domain
of an MX.

CNAME indirections should be explicitly discussed
(I'd like them permitted).

-- 
Cheers,
  Jeremy