[v6ops] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption-03: (with COMMENT)
"Benoit Claise" <bclaise@cisco.com> Tue, 17 November 2015 21:53 UTC
Return-Path: <bclaise@cisco.com>
X-Original-To: v6ops@ietf.org
Delivered-To: v6ops@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from ietfa.amsl.com (localhost [IPv6:::1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 00F301B316A; Tue, 17 Nov 2015 13:53:29 -0800 (PST)
MIME-Version: 1.0
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit
From: Benoit Claise <bclaise@cisco.com>
To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
X-Test-IDTracker: no
X-IETF-IDTracker: 6.10.0
Auto-Submitted: auto-generated
Precedence: bulk
Message-ID: <20151117215328.14492.2282.idtracker@ietfa.amsl.com>
Date: Tue, 17 Nov 2015 13:53:28 -0800
Archived-At: <http://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/v6ops/Cdusj7s6k_UVDnzBAdDn7eW6nxY>
Cc: v6ops@ietf.org, fred.baker@cisco.com, v6ops-chairs@ietf.org, draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption@ietf.org, bill.wu@huawei.com, draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption.all@tools.ietf.org
Subject: [v6ops] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption-03: (with COMMENT)
X-BeenThere: v6ops@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.15
List-Id: v6ops discussion list <v6ops.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/v6ops>, <mailto:v6ops-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/v6ops/>
List-Post: <mailto:v6ops@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:v6ops-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/v6ops>, <mailto:v6ops-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Tue, 17 Nov 2015 21:53:29 -0000
Benoit Claise has entered the following ballot position for draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption-03: No Objection When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory paragraph, however.) Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-v6ops-reducing-ra-energy-consumption/ ---------------------------------------------------------------------- COMMENT: ---------------------------------------------------------------------- Some editorial proposals from Qin, part of the OPS Directorate review. Here are a few suggestion and editorial comments: 1. Section 4, last bullet: s/ non-general-purpose/ dedicated 2. Section 5.1, bullet 2 said: “Administrators of networks that serve large numbers (tens or hundreds) of battery-powered devices SHOULD enable this behaviour.” which behavior should be enabled? “Responding to Router Solicitations with unicast Router Advertisements” or the behavior described by bullet 1? Please make this clear. 3. Section 5.1, bullet 3: The word “Section” repeats twice, it is not necessary. s/see section Section 4/see Section 4
- [v6ops] Benoit Claise's No Objection on draft-iet… Benoit Claise