[yang-doctors] Yangdoctors last call review of draft-ietf-opsawg-l3sm-l3nm-07

Radek Krejčí via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sun, 28 March 2021 15:12 UTC

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Reviewer: Radek Krejčí
Review result: Ready with Nits

The I-D document contains a single YANG module ietf-l3vpn-ntw.

The document as well as the module seems fine to me, I have just a single note,
which is probably actually my fault from the previous review of the connected
ietf-vpn-common module. There is `Section 4` reference in the module's
description to the IETF Trust Copyright information, but the correct reference
is supposed to be `Section 4.c`.