Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08
Eliot Lear <lear@cisco.com> Wed, 23 August 2017 20:36 UTC
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To: Andy Bierman <andy@yumaworks.com>, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com>
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Subject: Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-ietf-opsawg-mud-08
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Hi Andy, It probably *does* make sense (it didn't and then we reorged a bit). Eliot On 8/23/17 6:59 PM, Andy Bierman wrote: > > > On Wed, Aug 23, 2017 at 1:06 AM, Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com > <mailto:mbj@tail-f.com>> wrote: > > Hi, > > I would like to direct the YANG doctors attention to one design choice > in this document: > > The document defines a normal "config true" data model, but this data > model is not intended to be implemented by a server, but rather it > defines the file format of a "MUD file". > > This idea is not new, it is used e.g. in the anima voucher document. > Normally, we would require that they use "rc:yang-data" to define such > a structure. > > However, the MUD file is supposed to contain some top-level nodes > defined in the MUD YANG module, and also some /acl:access-lists > nodes. So even if the MUD document could define a rc:yang-data > structure for the top-level nodes defined in the MUD document, it > cannot get the access lists into this rc:yang-data structure. > > So the question to the YANG doctors is if this is ok, or if there is a > better way to define this file format. > > > Why is it a problem to use a grouping in rc:yang-data? > This clearly needs to be rc:yang-data, not a real module with > config=true objects. > I think the artifact can contain data that matches the structure of > config data. > It is an implementation detail to convert the artifact to config data > in a datastore. > > > > > /martin > > > > Andy > > > > Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com <mailto:mbj@tail-f.com>> wrote: > > Reviewer: Martin Bjorklund > > Review result: Ready with Issues > > > > Hi, > > > > I am the assigned YANG doctors reviewer for this document. Here are > > my comments: > > > > > > o Section 2 says: > > > > The MUD file is limited to the serialization of a > > small number of YANG schema, including the models specified > in the > > following documents: > > > > o [I-D.ietf-netmod-acl-model] > > > > o [RFC6991] > > > > Is the intention that *only* these models are included, or *at > > least* these models are included? > > > > RFC6991 doesn't define any data nodes, so I don't think it > needs to > > be listed. I suggest you are a bit more specific, and list: > > > > o ietf-access-control-list [I-D.ietf-netmod-acl-model] > > > > o ietf-mud [...] > > > > > > o Section 3 uses the term "element" (it is used in other places as > > well). YANG uses the term "data node" or "node". Or "YANG data > > node". I suggest you use one of these terms, and import the term > > in your Terminology section. > > > > Also, the YANG module uses the term "element" to refer to > "device": > > > > leaf is-supported { > > type boolean; > > description > > "The element is currently supported > > by the manufacturer."; > > } > > > > > > o In your Terminology section you introduce the term "Thing". But > > the text often use "device". Maybe use "device" consistently? > > > > > > o In order to get consistent indentation of the YANG modules, I > > suggest you run: > > > > pyang -f yang ietf-mud.yang > > > > (and same for ietf-acldns.yang) > > > > > > o Ensure that description statements contain proper sentences. > Also > > ensure that the descriptions are descriptive. As an example > of the > > latter, this is not a good description: > > > > description > > "Which way are we talking about?"; > > > > In general, I found that the main document had better > descriptions > > than the YANG module. Consider moving the text from the main > > document to the YANG module (this also reduces the risk of > > inconsistencies). If don't want to move text, I think you > need to > > spend some effort on almost all descriptions in the YANG module. > > > > > > o In both modules, make sure you have a single revision > > statement. Note that in IETF-terms, a revision statement is > added > > when a new version of the module is publsihed as an RFC (so the > > initial RFC would have one revision statement). > > > > > > o The "ietf-mud" module is a bit unorthodox; it defines > configuration > > data nodes, but it is not supposed to be implemented by a normal > > NETCONF/RESTCONF server. Rather, it will be instantiated in > a JSON > > file. I think this should be stated in the description of the > > module. > > > > > > o I don't think the feature "mud-acl" is necessary. It is only > used > > to make the acl augment conditional on the feature. I think that > > if this module is supported, the feature is also supported. > Or do > > you envision implementations of this module that would not > support > > this feature? If so, maybe you can explain that use case in the > > document. > > > > > > o leaf cache-validity could use a "units" statement: > > > > units "hours"; > > > > > > o I suggest you rename the grouping "access_lists" to > "access-lists" > > for consitency. > > > > > > o Should any of the leafs in "/metainfo" be mandatory? > > > > > > o The "extensions" leaf-list mentions an IANA registry for > > extensions. It would be usefule to mention this registry by > name. > > > > Also, shouldn't this registry be defined in the IANA > Considerations > > section? > > > > > > o Section 3.7 mentions a leaf "packet-direction". There is no such > > leaf in the YANG module. There is one called > "direction-initiated" > > though. > > > > But since the "/device" container contains two different ACL > sets, > > one for "to" and one for "from", is this augmentation really > > necessary? > > > > > > o The model has: > > > > leaf local-networks { > > type empty; > > description > > "this string is used to indicate networks > > considered local in a given environment."; > > > > This leaf is of type "empty", but the description says it is a > > string. > > > > Also, what is the format of this string? (Hmm, I think the > > description is wrong, this should indeed be type empty). > > > > > > o Would it be useful with an indication of the revision of > "ietf-mud" > > that is used as the schema for a MUD file? I.e., something > like a > > leaf "mud-module-revision" in the "metainfo" container. > > > > > > o The example in section 8 has some errors, e.g., it has some > > camelCase node names. > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > yang-doctors mailing list > > yang-doctors@ietf.org <mailto:yang-doctors@ietf.org> > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/yang-doctors > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/yang-doctors> > > > > _______________________________________________ > yang-doctors mailing list > yang-doctors@ietf.org <mailto:yang-doctors@ietf.org> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/yang-doctors > <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/yang-doctors> > >
- [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of draft-… Martin Bjorklund
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Eliot Lear
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Martin Bjorklund
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Andy Bierman
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Eliot Lear
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Martin Bjorklund
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Eliot Lear
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Kent Watsen
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Eliot Lear
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Martin Bjorklund
- Re: [yang-doctors] Yangdoctors early review of dr… Eliot Lear