Re: [6lo] TSV ART early review of draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac

Joe Touch <touch@isi.edu> Mon, 26 September 2016 21:37 UTC

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Subject: Re: [6lo] TSV ART early review of draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac
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CC'ing tsv-art...


On 9/26/2016 2:34 PM, Joe Touch wrote:
>
> Hi, all,
>
> I've reviewed this document as part of the Transport Area Review
> Team's (TSVART) ongoing effort to review key IETF documents. These
> comments were written primarily for the transport area directors, but
> are copied to the document's authors for their information and to
> allow them to address any issues raised. When done at the time of IETF
> Last Call, the authors should consider this review together with any
> other last-call comments they receive. Please always CC
> ​tsv-art@ietf.org <mailto:tsv-art@ietf.org> if you reply to or forward
> this review.
>
> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> you may receive. Please wait for direction from your document shepherd
> or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
>
> Document: draft-ietf-6lo-6lobac 
> Title: Transmission of IPv6 over MS/TP Networks
> Reviewer: J. Touch
> Review Date: Sept 26, 2016
> IETF Last Call Date: TBD
>
> Summary: The document impacts transport protocols only indirectly
> through its need to support the minimum required IPv6 MTU. The
> protocol already supports1280-1500B payloads without fragmentation and
> uses its own link header. This is sufficient for IPv6 and there should
> be no new interaction with transports.
>
> Major issues: There are no major TSV issues.
>
> Minor issues: There are no minor TSV issues.
>
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>
>