Re: [6lo] I-D Action: draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-18.txt

["Pascal Thubert (pthubert)" <[e-mail]>]

Dear all:

This update addresses comments made during the IESG review by Mirja Kühlewind, Ben Campbell, Benjamin Kaduk and Eric Rescorla. 
Eric and Ben, you'll be Acknowledge from v-19 sorry for the omission at the time of publication.
Thank you all!

Note that it is not fully agreed yet that all comments are fully addressed, but this publication provides a base for fine tuning and a good way to compare text.
Some duplicate text was removed as the document structure was modified for improved readability. In particular sections 4 and 6 were swapped, and section 5 was merged in 7.
The downrefs in the Terminology sections were removed from the Normative References section and moved into a specific section.

Cheers,

Pascal

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the IPv6 over Networks of Resource-constrained
> Nodes WG of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Registration Extensions for 6LoWPAN Neighbor Discovery
>         Authors         : Pascal Thubert
>                           Erik Nordmark
>                           Samita Chakrabarti
>                           Charles E. Perkins
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-18.txt
> 	Pages           : 44
> 	Date            : 2018-04-06
> 
> Abstract:
>    This specification updates RFC 6775 - 6LoWPAN Neighbor Discovery, to
>    clarify the role of the protocol as a registration technique,
>    simplify the registration operation in 6LoWPAN routers, as well as to
>    provide enhancements to the registration capabilities and mobility
>    detection for different network topologies including the backbone
>    routers performing proxy Neighbor Discovery in a low power network.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update/
> 
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-18
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-6lo-rfc6775-update-18
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