Re: [6lo] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15: (with COMMENT)
Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com> Wed, 05 April 2023 11:08 UTC
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Subject: Re: [6lo] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15: (with COMMENT)
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Dear Roman Danyliw. We submitted a revised draft (v-16) to resolve your last comment. https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ It is appreciated to review and for your valued comments. Best regards. Yong-Geun. 2023년 3월 16일 (목) 오후 10:16, Yong-Geun Hong <yonggeun.hong@gmail.com>님이 작성: > Dear Roman Danyliw. > > Thanks for your valuable comments. > > Based on your comments, I updated the text in section 2.5 but I missed it > in the table in section 2.7. > > I agree with your point and I think it should be updated from "health-care > services" to "secure transfer". > Secure transfer includes payment and health-care service, etc. > > I will update the draft and re-submit. > > Best regards. > > Yong-Geun. > > > 2023년 3월 16일 (목) 오전 8:17, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>님이 > 작성: > >> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for >> draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases-15: No Objection >> >> When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all >> email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this >> introductory paragraph, however.) >> >> >> Please refer to >> https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ >> for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. >> >> >> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: >> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-6lo-use-cases/ >> >> >> >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> COMMENT: >> ---------------------------------------------------------------------- >> >> Thank you to Robert Sparks for the SECDIR review. >> >> Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS and my substantive COMMENTs. >> >> == >> >> ** Section 2.7 >> >> The following table shows the dominant parameters of each >> use case corresponding to the 6lo link layer technology. >> >> Is NFC “dominantly” only used in “health-care services”? Is there a >> basis for that assertion. >> >> >> >>
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