Re: [6lo] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-05

"Liubing (Remy)" <remy.liubing@huawei.com> Fri, 05 March 2021 04:16 UTC

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To: Meral Shirazipour <meral.shirazipour@ericsson.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Hello Meral,

Thank you very much for your review.

Best regards,
Remy
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发件人: 6lo [mailto:6lo-bounces@ietf.org] 代表 Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker
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主题: [6lo] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-6lo-plc-05

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Almost Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team
(Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments.

For more information, please see the FAQ at

<https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.

Document: draft-ietf-6lo-plc-05

Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-02-15
IETF LC End Date: 2021-02-15
IESG Telechat date: NA

Summary: This draft is ready to be published as Standards Track RFC , no more comments other than those mentioned on the list already.

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

Best Regards,
Meral
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Ericsson
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