[6tisch] 6top-04 doc
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From: "Turner, Randy" <Randy.Turner@landisgyr.com>
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Subject: [6tisch] 6top-04 doc
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Hi All, Just a couple of comments on my reading of the -04 draft - still have some more reading to do... page 16 - leaf "Peroid" should probably be "Period" page 17 - wouldn't leaf AvgTimeCorrection be more mnemonic than AveTimeCorrection? Also, this document is called "...6top-interface" but then the document starts out with the statement "...this document defines a data model" -- seems like the document title should be "...6top-data-model" Randy P PLEASE CONSIDER OUR ENVIRONMENT BEFORE PRINTING THIS EMAIL. This e-mail (including any attachments) is confidential and may be legally privileged. If you are not an intended recipient or an authorized representative of an intended recipient, you are prohibited from using, copying or distributing the information in this e-mail or its attachments. If you have received this e-mail in error, please notify the sender immediately by return e-mail and delete all copies of this message and any attachments. Thank you.
- [6tisch] 6top-04 doc Turner, Randy