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"Turner, Randy" <Randy.Turner@landisgyr.com> Mon, 18 April 2016 18:38 UTC

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From: "Turner, Randy" <Randy.Turner@landisgyr.com>
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Subject: [6tisch] comments on latest terminology draft
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Hi Guys,

I had a couple of comments on the recent -07 terminology draft:

Deterministic Network - "A deterministic network can allocates..." should be "A deterministic network can allocate..."

"6top Data Convey Model" - Model describing how the 6top adaptation layer...<snip>
Is this really an adaptation layer? - In the IETF, the term "adaptation layer" has come to mean something different

6p Transaction - "Part of the 6top Protocol, in consists in" should probably be "...consists of"

"Bundle" - typo "usining" should be "using"

"Link" - When I read this description, it sounds similar to an interference domain - should the difference (if any) be spelled out or distinguished ? Or am I the only one that sees this similarity?

Thanks!
R.

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