Re: [6tisch] [IANA #1160596] expert review for draft-ietf-6tisch-enrollment-enhanced-beacon (ieee-std-802.15.4-ietf-ie-subtype-ids)

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Fri, 14 February 2020 16:42 UTC

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In addition to the comments from Tero, Pat Kinney provided a marked up
review, which I have placed at
  http://www.sandelman.ca/SSW/ietf/6tisch/kinney-enrollment-enhanced-beacon-edits-2020.html

It arrived in some Apple proprietary format, having red-lines and
replacements, which after some grumpiness, I determined to some binary junk
followed by HTML. 
The crux is that Pat prefers "transmit" to "send" and "receive" to "hears",
and I accept his wisdom about my use of vernacular language.

{I am now contemplating about writing an RFC in Belta Creole. 
   _Operational Considerations for Interstellar Wormholes_}

The changes from Pat are now at:
   https://bitbucket.org/6tisch/6tisch-join-enhanced-beacon/commits/8b18e8ae818c80f09b9b598bde8504f8d566a0d7

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