Re: [abfab] FW: New Version Notification - draft-ietf-abfab-arch-11.txt

Linus Nordberg <linus@nordberg.se> Tue, 11 February 2014 21:38 UTC

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"Jim Schaad" <ietf@augustcellars.com> wrote
Tue, 11 Feb 2014 11:13:50 -0800:

| This update deals with comments from the AD, the SecDir review and IETF last call comments.

Nits new to -11:

- s/the ability to support channel binding those cses where/the ability to support channel binding in those cases where/1

- maybe s/needs to validate it is talking to the correct RP/needs to validate that it is talking to the correct RP/1

- s|http://www.eduroam.org|https://www.eduroam.org/1

Old nits (doh! sorry for being late):

- s/I-D.ietf-radext-dtls/RFC6614/g

- s/was"/was/1

- s/from the IDP to the RP/from the IdP to the RP/1

- s/per-\nmessage services will limit/per-\nmessage security services will limit/1