Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17

Thomas Fossati <tho.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 15 December 2023 16:55 UTC

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From: Thomas Fossati <tho.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 15 Dec 2023 17:55:15 +0100
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-17
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Hi Marco,

On Fri, Dec 15, 2023 at 5:08 PM Marco Tiloca
<marco.tiloca=40ri.se@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:
>
> Hello Thomas,
>
> Thanks a lot for your review! Please find in line below our detailed replies to your comments.
>
> A Github PR where we have addressed your comments is available at [PR].
>
> Unless any concern is raised, we plan to soon merge this PR (and the other ones related to other received reviews), and to submit the result as version -18 of the document.

I've looked at the PR and found it to address my review with fantastic
precision.

Thanks a lot for considering my comments and giving them such thorough
treatment :-)

cheers,
-- 
Thomas