Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Roman Danyliw's Yes on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)

Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se> Wed, 24 March 2021 11:57 UTC

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From: Seitz Ludwig <ludwig.seitz@combitech.se>
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Thread-Topic: [EXTERNAL] Roman Danyliw's Yes on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Ace] [EXTERNAL] Roman Danyliw's Yes on draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-38: (with COMMENT)
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Hello Roman,

Thank you for your review. I have taken the liberty to copy your text suggestion for the differences to OAuth 2.0 directly into the document as a new appendix
(you will also find an acknowledgment in the acknowledgments section).

For the issue below, I need to coordinate with the main authors of the other drafts you refer to. This may take a bit longer than the rest:
> 
> ** Would the first paragraph of Section 7.2 of draft-ietf-ace-dtls-authorize
> providing caution about the challenges of multiple access tokens be better
> served by placing it in this document?  Section 7 of draft-ietf-ace-oscore-
> profile has similar words too.
> 

I have implemented fixes for your other comments and plan to submit an update (including fixes for other IESG reviews as well) by the end of this week.

Regards,

Ludwig