Re: [Ace] AD review of draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-08

[Jim Schaad <[e-mail]>]

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From: Ace <[e-mail]> On Behalf Of Francesca Palombini
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To: Benjamin Kaduk <[e-mail]>; [e-mail]; Ace Wg <[e-mail]>
Subject: Re: [Ace] AD review of draft-ietf-ace-oscore-profile-08

Hi Ben,

Thank you so much for this very thorough and in-depth review! 

I have started a PR (https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-oscore-profile/pull/25 ) where I plan to include all the review comments. I have started with the editorial fixes, which I have collected in one issue: https://github.com/ace-wg/ace-oscore-profile/issues/24 

The details of answers and additional questions for clarification are inline, I also noted with "OK" the points where I agree with your suggestion and don't see any problem implementing in the PR. I will keep the numbering consistent in the mail thread and in the github to make sure everything is covered.

Additionally, you made a number of points I'd like to get wg opinion on:

* The mechanism of letting the RS pick the identifier of the client is not worth the additional complexity. So I propose we revert that, and go back to AS MUST pick the clientId, the clientId MUST be included in the token. This will only add some considerations about the scenario has several-AS-per-RS, in which case these AS need to be synchronized on clientIds they give out. (6., 21., 61., 65.)

[JLS] For better or worse, this is not the only consideration.  The above statement presumes that only the AS is going to be assigning the client identifiers.  If the RS uses a different method of doing authentication as well, such as LAKE, then there is a chance for collisions at that point as well.

* Recommendation about length of nonces N1 and N2 to use. The wg agreed on 64 bits, now Ben suggests to use 128 bits nonces. Reminder: these nonces are appended to the input salt to create the Master Salt, to run the HKDF and derive the keys. Also consider that OSCORE appendix B2 has a similar setting and does some considerations about that, mentioning that "typically nonces of at least 8 bytes will be used".

[JLS] I am agnostic on this, but I think that generally 64-bits from each side is sufficient.  This does add an additional 8 bytes of message size when sending the token to the server.  That worries me slightly.

* Define and register 2 new ACE parameters to transport the nonces used in the exchange, instead of using "cnonce". (see point 3., 53.)
* Define the nonces as bstr so that length value is encoded. (7.)
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8613#page-72 
* Editorial: point 75.

Thanks again!
Francesca

On 07/01/2020, 17:40, "Ace on behalf of Benjamin Kaduk" <[e-mail] on behalf of [e-mail]> wrote:

    Hi all,
    
    Some high-level points before the section-by-section commentary:
    
1.    I'm a little confused by the registry we are creating in Section 9.2.
    While it's clear that we need something to specify the CBOR map key
    labels to encode the structure for transit, it's not clear that we need
    easy extensibility vs.  a fixed table.  A registry implies expectations
    of future additions, but draft-ietf-core-object-security did not feel a
    need to make a registry for future extensions; what has changed in the
    past few months that makes extensibility needed now?  Why is this
    document the right place to create the registry as opposed to that one?
    
FP: Why extensibility now: an example is the Group OSCORE profile, which extends this registry with fields that the OSCORE profile does not need, related to countersignatures (see https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-key-groupcomm-oscore-04#page-22 ). The difference between OSCORE (RFC8613) and this doc is that in OSCORE the security context is never sent on the wire, it is assumed to be pre-established, while here we needed to define a structure to send. Yes, we could avoid defining the registry and define all the fields (we can think of right now), including those for ace-key-groupcomm-oscore as a fixed table, but we thought this would be better, also considering that the OSCORE security context could get extended in a future version of OSCORE.

2.    We are in some sense defining a new substructure within "kid" values (a
    CBOR-encoded array of one or two elements) for usage by things using
    this profile.  That's probably not problematic, as the "kid" can be an
    arbitrary bstr and its interpretation is up to the recipient -- any
    recipient that implements this profile will know to handle the
    substructure, but it does feel a little unusual and perhaps worth an
    early note.  (IIUC, we also need to be careful about actually providing
    the bstr framing in our examples.)
    
FP: Ok, I will add an early note and also make sure the array is wrapped in a bstr. Do you have any opinion on where best to add this note? Kid appears first in 3.1, should we have it in the introductory section 3.? Or were you thinking even before?

3.    I'm concerned about the usage of "cnonce" to carry both N1 and N2,
    neither of which correspond to the "cnonce" behavior in the core
    framework; I think we should pick a different parameter name for the
    differeng semantic usage.  Specifically, the core-framework "cnonce" is
    a tool to give RSes some modicum of replay protection -- it verifies
    that the client's authorization in the token is "fresh", since the token
    includes the random nonce generated by the RS and conveyd to the AS via
    the client.  This document uses a parameter named "cnonce" in two ways:
    (1) to convey the client-generated nonce N1 to the RS in the authz-info
    request; this is giving the client contributory behavior to the
    ephemeral randomness input to the Security Context computation but does
    not provide any sort of replay-protection in and of itself
    (2) to convey the RS-generated nonce N2 back to the client in the
    authz-info response; this does serve as replay protection in some sense,
    but in that it serves to cause repeated posting of the same token (as
    might occur in a replay attack) to generate a different OSCORE context
    (due to the RSes contributory nature) so that the resulting key material
    will be unique for a given association, as opposed to detecting and
    blocking replay outright.  I think all three uses should have distinct
    parameter names, based on my current understanding.
    
FP: Yes, your understanding is right. I don't see any problem at all with defining new parameters names for the nonces, the reason we used "cnonce" is that this exact point was brought up in the wg and everybody seemed to agree on no need to define a new one, despite the semantics of "cnonce". The authors did not have a strong opinion.

4.    We mention several times about getting protection from AEAD nonce/key
    reuse, but to some extent leave it to the reader to figure out how that
    works.  Specifically, the only guidance we give on nonce selection is
    for our N1 and N2 that go into the Master Salt; we don't say how varying
    the Master Salt like that will cause the generated keys and (common) IVs
    to differ across runs, thus by construction preventing the collision of
    (key, nonce) pairs.  (Implementation carelessness that just reuses
    key+nonce for a given Security Context is still possible, of course.)
    
FP: Would it be sufficient to add a sentence in Section 2 saying that by construction if Master Salt is different that will generate different keys and common IVs (+ reference to OSCORE)? For example in this paragraph:

   In fact, by using random nonces as part
   of the Master Salt, the request to the authz-info endpoint posting
   the same token results in a different Security Context, since Master
   Secret, Sender ID and Recipient ID are the same but Master Salt is
   different.

5.    In a related vein, we do not get into full detail about the
    cryptographic role played by N1 and N2, so as to make the reader
    confident that our 64-bit recommendation does provide full
    Internet-grade security (as opposed to a weakened "IoT" variant).  I'm
    not specifically concerned, but we may get some reviewers asking for
    more detail.
    
FP: would it be sufficient to add text along the lines of what you describe in point 3 above?

6.    I am, however, concerned about the exposure to an RFC 3552-style
    attacker for unprotected authz-info responses.  There are two main
    aspects I'm concerned about: identifier selection and nonce selection.
    Letting the server override the client's idea of its own identity (even
    when the AS has given the client an identifier!) seems to increase the
    risk of a client being tricked into impersonating a different client,
    and the stated justification (letting the RS preserve uniqueness)
    doesn't seem to hold up in our one-AS-per-RS stated scope, where the AS
    can equally well do so.  Based on what I know right now, it doesn't feel
    like we're at the right point on the cost/benefit curve.  For the nonce
    selection, this comes into play due to the lack of injectivity for the
    mapping of initial AS-generated salt, N1, and N2 into the Master Salt.
    Specifically, if a client chooses an N1 that's a prefix of some other N1
    that was used, then the attacker can send an "N2" that contains the tail
    end of that other N1 plus the actual N2 picked by the server in that
    other exchange, causing a full nonce collision and having the
    AS-generated portion be the only difference in Master Salt between
    security contexts.  Using a length prefix for the fields being
    concatenated provides injectivity and thwarts this type of attack.
    
FP: Concerning identifier selection: after a number of points raised (here and in following points), I do believe that the mechanism of letting the RS pick the identifier of the client is not worth the additional complexity. So I propose we revert that, and go back to AS MUST pick the clientId, the clientId MUST be included in the token. This will only add some considerations about the scenario has several-AS-per-RS, in which case these AS need to be synchronized on clientIds they give out. 
About nonce selection: we will define N1 and N2 as CBOR bstr, so that the length prefix will be included.

7.    There are a few places where I'm not entirely sure how the protocol flow
    works for the case where the RS is (re)assigning the clientId; I've
    tried to note them in the section-by-section comments.
    
FP: Yes, I agree, we missed some of those. As mentioned, I think it could be solved, but the additional complexity is probably not worth it.

    On to the section-by-section notes:
    
    Section 1
    
8.    I'd suggest noting that this is a symmetric-crypto-based scheme in some
    manner (e.g., that the AS is assigning a shared symmetric key used as the
    OSCORE master secret), and/or that asymmetric PoP semantics are not possible
    with this mechanism (or OSCORE in general).

FP: OK
    
9.    I'd also suggest noting that proof of possession is not done by a dedicated
    protocol element, but rather occurs implicitly based on knowledge of the
    OSCORE Security Context.  (This is essentially analogous to Kerberos, but a
    reference is not strictly needed.)  We do have a good treatment in
    toplevel Section 4, but it might be worth saying earlier.
    
FP: OK

    Section 2
    
10.       [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz].  The access token request and response
       MUST be confidentiality-protected and ensure authenticity.  This
       profile RECOMMENDS the use of OSCORE between client and AS, but TLS
       or DTLS MAY be used additionally or instead.
    
    Since the client/AS and client/RS profile are supposed to be completely
    severable, I don't think we should use "MAY" here; perhaps "but other
    protocols (such as TLS or DTLS) can be used as well".
    
FP: OK

11.       Once the client has retrieved the access token, it generates a nonce
       N1 and posts both the token and N1 to the RS using the authz-info
       endpoint and mechanisms specified in section 5.8 of
       [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] and Content-Format = application/ace+cbor.
    
    Do we want to say explicitly that there is no cryptographic protection
    applied for this POST to authz-info?

FP: OK (will add a note)
    
12.       which contains a nonce N2 in a CBOR map.  Moreover, the server
       concatenates N1 with N2 and appends the result to the Master Salt in
       the Security Context (see section 3 of
       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security]).  The RS then derives the complete
       Security Context associated with the received token from it plus the
       parameters received in the AS, following section 3.2 of
       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].
    
    This passage feels strange to me, probably because it seems to use "Master
    Salt" to both the portion with and without N1+N2, and also because it does
    not introduce "the Master Salt" as a term or some other object that deserves
    the definite article.  Would it be equivalent to say "Moreover, the server
    concatenates the input salt, N1, and N2 to obtain the Master Salt of the
    OSCORE Security Context (see section 3 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security]"
    instead?  (Though the details may yet change based on later comments...)
    Is "from it" the resulting Master Salt?
    There seems to be a word or two missing in "the parameters received in
    the AS".  (Presumably these parameters are contained in the token?)
    
FP: OK. Yes,that would be equivalent. Yes, "From it" referred to the Master Salt (the input salt concatenated with N1 and N2). Yes, it's missing "received in the access token from the AS".

13.       After receiving the nonce N2, the client concatenates it with N1 and
       appends the result to the Master Salt in its Security Context (see
       section 3 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security]).  The client then
       derives the complete Security Context from the nonces plus the
       parameters received from the AS.
    
    Similarly, IIUC we should be able to word this so that the "Master Salt" is
    unique (and includes the nonces), as opposed to having it apparently refer to
    both the pre- and post-nonce-includion strings.
    Are these "parameters" received from the AS in the token response?
    
FP: OK. Yes, they are.

14.       Finally, the client sends a request protected with OSCORE to the RS.
       If the request verifies, then this Security Context is stored in the
       server, and used in the response, and in further communications with
       the client, until token expiration.  This Security Context is
       discarded if the same token is re-used to successfully derive a new
       Security Context.
    
    The conditional on storing the Security Context only if the request
    verifies reads oddly to me, as the RS seems to have needed to store some
    amount of security context information for the period betweeen receiving
    the token and receiving the authenticated request, as a prerequisite to
    being able to verify the request.
    Also, is this security context discarded if a new token from the same
    client is successfully used?

FP: "Storing" is probably not clear enough, the point is that only after the request passes verification the server marks this security context as "valid" for this client. I'd love suggestions on how to make this clearer. Yes, the security context is discarded if a new token (or a valid old one) is successfully used. Is anything missing here?
    
15.       The use of random nonces during the exchange prevents the reuse of
       AEAD nonces and keys with different messages, in case of re-
       derivation of the Security Context both for Clients and Resource
       Servers from an old non-expired access token, e.g. in case of re-boot
       of either the client or RS.  In fact, by using random nonces as part
    
    This sentence is pretty long and a little hard to parse.  I'd suggest
    something more like:
    
    %  The use of random nonces during the exchange prevents the reuse of
    %  an AEAD nonces/key pair for two different messages.  This situation
    %  might occur when client and RS derive a new Security Context from an
    %  existing (non-expired) access token, as might occur when either party
    %  has just rebooted.  [...]
    
FP: OK

    I'd also consider s/In fact/Instead/ since we are contrasting the
    previously described hypothetical (bad) scenario with what actually
    happens.
    
FP: OK

16.       of the Master Salt, the request to the authz-info endpoint posting
       the same token results in a different Security Context, since Master
       Secret, Sender ID and Recipient ID are the same but Master Salt is
       different.  Therefore, the main requirement for the nonces is that
    
    nit: [more usage of "Master Salt" for pre- and post-nonce forms]
    I'd also suggest to s/since/since even though the/ (and the s/but/the/
    needed to fix up the end of the sentence).

FP: OK (reformulation already fixed in PR)
    
    I also want to check my understanding: this "different Security Context" is
    still going to use the same identifiers for the endpoints, and will just have
    different keys/IVs/etc?  This would tie in to the (later) recommendation to
    have such a new Security Context completely replace the old one, since
    otherwise we'd have to resort to trial decryption to determine which
    Security Context to use for processing a given message.
    
FP: Yes, it would use the same identifiers. Typically, the old security context would get discarded when the new one is validated. Applications could still decide to keep more than one context, and in that case yes, they'd have to rely on trial decryption, but that is not the goal of this document.

17.       they have a good amount of randomness.  If random nonces were not
       used, a node re-using a non-expired old token would be susceptible to
       on-path attackers provoking the creation of OSCORE messages using old
       AEAD keys and nonces.
    
    I guess the focus on "good amount of randomness" is trying to emphasize
    that we merely need to avoid a single node accidentally producing the
    same value, as opposed to a stricter property of unguessability by an
    on-path attacker?  Or is unguessability also needed when the attacker
    can delay traffic?
    
FP: Yes, that is correct (about the single node). We do not think unguessability is needed. Do you think it should?

    Section 3
    
18.       Section 3.2 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security] defines how to derive
       a Security Context based on a shared master secret and a set of other
       parameters, established between client and server, which the client
       receives from the AS in this exchange.  The proof-of-possession key
    
    We say that the client gets the OSCORE parameters from the AS in the
    token response; where do we say how the RS gets the OSCORE parameters
    from the AS?
    
FP: Do you mean this sentence from section 4.

   The
   client generates a nonce N1 and posts it together with the token that
   includes the materials provisioned by the AS to the RS. 

And if not, what are we missing?

    Section 3.1
    
19.       The client MUST send this POST request to the token endpoint over a
       secure channel that guarantees authentication, message integrity and
       confidentiality (see Section 5).
    
    (The framework already requires this, so we may not need the "MUST"
    keyword again, though I'm not proposing to remove all mention of the
    need for these properties.)

FP: OK, will remove normative MUST etc for the requirements coming from the framework.
    
20.       An example of such a request, in CBOR diagnostic notation without the
       tag and value abbreviations is reported in Figure 2
    
    nit: only the payload is using CBOR diagnostic notation; the headers are
    using CoAP notation.

FP: Done in PR.
    
21.       If the client wants to update its access rights without changing an
       existing OSCORE Security Context, it MUST include in its POST request
       to the token endpoint a req_cnf object.  The req_cnf MUST include a
       kid field carrying a CBOR array object containing the client's
       identifier (assigned in section Section 3.2) and optionally the
       context identifier (if assigned in section Section 3.2).  The CBOR
    
    I'm not sure the best way to write a clear description that includes the
    "bstr" framing for "kid".

FP: OK, it is missing here that the CBOR array is wrapped in a bstr. I did miss that the kid is a CBOR bstr and not a byte string.

    Also, nit: the "assigned" language in the parentheticals feels weird to
    me, here.

FP: Why? the use of "assigned" was to highlight that that's the value the AS has set and communicated to the Client. How can we make it clearer?

    What's the workflow when the RS has overridden the AS's idea of the
    clientId?  Does the client have to remember the original AS-assigned
    clientId and use it here instead of the RS-assigned one?

FP: Good point, which we did not expand on. Yes, to make this mechanism work (RS can pick an identifier for the client + AS has already assigned one) the client would have to remember the original AS-assigned clientID and use that. Or we should define a mechanism for the client to communicate the RS-assigned clientId to the AS. This would be necessary also in case the AS did not assign the clientId at all. After thinking this through I think this complication makes this RS overwriting the clientId mechanism not worth having.

    
22.       These identifiers can be used by the AS to determine the shared
       secret to construct the proof-of-possession token and therefore MUST
       identify a symmetric key that was previously generated by the AS as a
       shared secret for the communication between the client and the RS.
    
    nit: I suggest s/shared secret to construct/shared secret bound to/
    
FP: Done in PR.

    Also, I think the AS will need to use some of the other token request
    parameters (e.g., req_aud) in order to determine the client and RS for
    which it needs to retrieve the shared PoP key.  We might want to mention
    that as well.

FP: I am not sure that would be needed, in principle. If the client sends them, then yes, they could be used (and I can add text clarifying that), but if it doesn't, those identifiers should be enough.
    
23.       The AS MUST verify that the received value identifies a proof-of-
       possession key and token that have previously been issued to the
       requesting client.  If that is not the case, the Client-to-AS request
    
    nit: It's not clear that we need it to identify a specific token, just a
    key.  (And in fact for multiple successive access-rights updates, there
    will be more than one previous token.)
    
FP: Done in PR. Unrelated, but why would the AS keep more than one previous token?

    The "kid" "req_cnf" member in Figure 4's example does not include the
    bstr wrapper that draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession suggests is
    required.

FP: correct, kid is missing the bstr wrapper, but req_cnf should be correct, as it should be a map (https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-params-11#section-3.1 defines it having the same structure of "cnf" from draft-ietf-ace-cwt-proof-of-possession, which in section 3.4 defines it as a CBOR map).
    
    Section 3.2
    
24.       Moreover, the AS MUST provision the following data:
    
    It's frequently the case in IETF documents that "provision" is a
    euphimism for "out-of-band configuration", so if we mean "include in the
    token response" it's probably better to say that directly.

FP: OK, Done in PR.
    
25.       Additionally, the AS MAY provision the following data, in the same
       response.
    
    When the AS does not do so, how are these parameters determined?
    
FP: Context ID can be omitted and not used in OSCORE. AEAD alg, HKDF alg, salt and replay window can be omitted and then the default value would be used in OSCORE. That should be clear from section 4.3, specifically the sentence:
" In
   case these parameters are omitted, the default values are used as
   described in section 3.2 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security]. "
Anything else we need to add?

26.       The OSCORE_Security_Context is a CBOR map object, defined in
       Section 3.2.1.  The master secret MUST be communicated as the 'ms'
       field in the OSCORE_Security_Context in the 'cnf' parameter of the
       access token response as defined in Section 3.2 of
       [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-params].  The AEAD algorithm MAY be included as
    
    nit: s/in the OSCORE_Security_Context/in the OSCORE_Security_Context
    field/, I think?

FP: Done in PR. Yes it is.
    
27.       the 'alg' parameter in the OSCORE_Security_Context; the HKDF
       algorithm MAY be included as the 'hkdf' parameter of the
       OSCORE_Security_Context, a salt MAY be included as the 'salt'
       parameter of the OSCORE_Security_Context, and the replay window type
       and size MAY be included as the 'rpl' of the OSCORE_Security_Context,
       as defined in Section 3.2.1.
    
    I think we want to reword all of these, as I understand what we're doing
    to be defining the parameters in which these values are conveyed, if
    they are conveyed at all.  Just saying "<X> MAY be conveyed in <Y>" has
    the connotation that <X> might alternatively be conveyed in some other
    <Z> that is not mentioned.  The relevant MAY for our purposes is the one
    above the list -- "the AS MAY provision the following data".

FP: OK. I will remove all the normative MAY and replace them with may. Would that be sufficient?
    
28.       The same parameters MUST be included as metadata of the access token.
       This profile RECOMMENDS the use of CBOR web token (CWT) as specified
       in [RFC8392].  If the token is a CWT, the same
       OSCORE_Security_Context structure defined above MUST be placed in the
       'cnf' claim of this token.
    
    nit: "metadata of the access token" sounds like it's trying to be a term
    of art, but it is not presently used as such.  s/metadata/attributes/
    would, IIUC, be more in keeping with OAuth 2.0 tradition.

FP: rephrased into "part of the access token" in PR, is that ok?

    not-nit: the second sentence seems redundant with the second sentence of
    the previous paragraph.

FP: I do agree there is some redundancy. The previous sentence’s MUST referred to the master secret and how it MUST be transported (‘ms’ field of ‘OSCORE_Security_Context’ in ‘cnf’), this sentence is about OSCORE_Security_Context in ‘cnf’. I suggest removing the first MUST, as that will be compliant with point 27, removing the normative MAYs.
    
29.       The AS MUST also assign an identifier to the RS (serverId), MAY
       assign an identifier to the client (clientId), and MAY assign an
       identifier to the context (contextId).  These identifiers are then
       used as Sender ID, Recipient ID and ID Context in the OSCORE context
       as described in section 3.1 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  The
       couple (client identifier, context identifier) MUST be unique in the
       set of all clients on a single RS.  Moreover, when assigned,
       serverId, clientId and contextId MUST be included in the
       OSCORE_Security_Context, as defined in Section 3.2.1.
    
    [Any time we're assigning identities we have to say something about the
    privacy properties thereof, or a bunch of reviewers will complain.]

FP: OK. What about adding privacy considerations pointing to the privacy considerations in OSCORE? I feel that should cover it.

    Is the Recipient ID expected to be stable/persistent for a given RS as seen
    by all clients?

FP: Not necessarily.

    nit: "all clients on a single RS" reads oddly to me; maybe s/on/of/?

FP: Done in PR. s/on/for

    nit: I'd suggest to replace "couple" with "tuple" or "pair".

FP: Done in PR: "pair".

    nit: serverId is always assigned by the AS, so the "when assigned"
    doesn't quite bind properly, grammar-wise.  While the clientId is
    "always assigned" by the time of the Master Secret derivation, this is
    just discussing the AS token response, so we can't necessarily assume
    it's assigned here, at least with the current protocol spec.

FP: Done in PR. I believe this is a formulation problem. Yes the serverId is always assigned, so it would always be included in the OSCORE_Security_Context. The point of this sentence was: whenever the AS assigns a value for the identifier, it also sets the corresponding field to that value in the OSCORE_Security_Context. I reformulated: The pair (client identifier, context identifier) MUST be unique in the set of all clients for a single RS.  Moreover, clientId, serverId and (when assigned) contextId MUST be included in the OSCORE_Security_Context, as defined in ... This would be consistent with removing the option of clientId not being included in the OSCORE_Security_Context.
    
    OSCORE requires a Sender ID and Recipient ID, but we only have it as
    optional for the AS to assign the clientId -- what does OSCORE use as
    the Sender/Recipient ID when the AS does not assign a clientId?

FP: That was the case where the RS MUST assign a clientId, see section 4.2:
“Moreover, if the OSCORE_Security_Context in the token did not
   contain a 'clientId' parameter, the RS MUST generate an identifier,
   unique in the set of all its existing client identifiers, and send it
   in a 'clientId' parameter in the CBOR map as a CBOR bstr.“
But if we agree on removing this mechanism, this becomes outdated.
    
    When certain fields are optional, we typically have to ask whether it's
    possible for the two parties to disagree about whether the field is
    present.  IIUC, the OSCORE context derivation procedure includes enough
    information to prevent that possibility, but it would be good if someone
    would confirm that.

FP: That is correct, a number of fields have default values when non present. Hkdf, alg, salt, contextId, rpl. On the other hand, ms, clientId and serverId need to be set.
    
30.       We assume in this document that a resource is associated to one
       single AS, which makes it possible to assume unique identifiers for
       each client requesting a particular resource to a RS.  If this is not
    
    I feel like this might be more clear if we can frame it in terms of the
    AS enforcing the uniqueness of client identifiers (or, if you will, that
    we delegate the enforcement thereof to the AS...)
    
FP: OK

31.       the case, collisions of identifiers may appear in the RS, in which
       case the RS needs to have a mechanism in place to disambiguate
       identifiers or mitigate their effect.
    
    nit: s/appear in/occur at/

FP: Done in PR.

    nit: s/mitigate their effect/mitigate the effect of the collisions/

FP: Done in PR.
    
32.       Note that in Section 4.3 C sets the Sender ID of its Security Context
       to the clientId value received and the Recipient ID to the serverId
       value, and RS does the opposite.
    
    (The way this is written implicitly assumes that both clientId and
    serverId are received from the AS.)

FP: That's right. I would keep as is if we agree on removing the RS-assigns-identifier mechanism.
    
33.       Figure 5 shows an example of such an AS response, in CBOR diagnostic
       notation without the tag and value abbreviations.
    
    I'd suggest s/such an AS response/an AS token response/

FP: OK
    
34.             "access_token" : h'a5037674656d7053656e73 ...'
              (remainder of access token omitted for brevity)',
    
    In addition to the invalid-CBOR-diagnostic-notation-syntax comment, we
    also have unbalanced quotes.

FP: Right, but this is not valid CBOR diagnostic notation syntax anyway, do you have a better idea? I do not think it would be useful to have the full token here. Will remove the unbalanced quote.
    
35.             "profile" : "coap_oscore",
             "expires_in" : "3600",
             "cnf" : {
               "OSCORE_Security_Context" : {
                 "alg" : "AES-CCM-16-64-128",
                 "clientId" : b64'qA',
                 "serverId" : b64'Qg',
    
    Any reason to prefer b64'qA' over h'a8' which is shorter?

FP: No, this is a leftover of some previous example. Will remove b64 encodings.
    
36.       If the client has requested an update to its access rights using the
       same OSCORE Security Context, which is valid and authorized, the AS
       MUST omit the 'cnf' parameter in the response, and MUST carry the
       client identifier and optionally the context identifier in the 'kid'
       field in the 'cnf' parameter of the token, with the same structure
    
    I think we should be careful about referring to this as "optionally the
    context identifier" -- the choice for whether there is a context
    identifier is made once (at initial issuance), and subsequent usage
    depends on whether one has been allocated or not.  It's not like the AS
    can decide at runtime "I gave you a context identifier for your original
    security context, but I don't feel like giving it to you again" -- the
    derived keys won't match up and it won't be reusable as the same
    security context.

FP: Right, this again is a formulation problem. The optionality comes from if it has ever been assigned/allocated/set for that security context. What about reformulating into: 
, and MUST carry the
       client identifier and the context identifier (if it was set and included in the initial access token response byt the AS) in the 'kid'
       field in the 'cnf' parameter of the token, with the same structure

    Also, I'm not sure this is fully defined for the case when the RS
    overrides the AS's clientId assignment, as the kid array in the token
    needs to be the value the RS will know, but the kid in req_cnf needs to
    be the one the AS knows, and we don't really define a mechanism for the
    AS to be able to do translation from one to the other.
    
FP: Right… this is getting complicated. If the client and the RS both kept track of AS-assigned and RS-assigned clientId, that could still work. Or if there was a mechanism for the client to communicate to the AS: “this is the RS-assigned kid, this is the AS-assigned kid, please talk to me as the former”. As mentioned, I think this is getting too complicated and propose removing this mechanism altogether.

37.       defined in Figure 3.  These identifiers need to be provisioned, in
       order for the RS to identify the previously generated Security
       Context.
    
    nits: there's only one (not "these") identifier in the token, and
    nothing in the token response; and a similar remark about "provisioned"
    as was made above.

FP: Here it referred to both clientId and contextId (from the previous sentence), which are carried in the kid field, so I think “these” should be ok. Please correct me if I am wrong. Ok about provisioned, done in PR.
    
38.       Figure 9 shows an example CWT, containing the necessary OSCORE
       parameters in the 'cnf' claim for update of access rights, in CBOR
       diagnostic notation without tag and value abbreviations.
    
         {
           "aud" : "tempSensorInLivingRoom",
           "iat" : "1360189224",
           "exp" : "1360289224",
           "scope" :  "temperature_h",
           "cnf" : {
             "kid" : b64'qA'
    
    I don't think this "kid" is a valid CBOR bstr wrapping the one- or
    two-element array.

FP: OK
    
    Section 3.2.1
    
39.       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security]).  The OSCORE_Security_Context object
       can either be encoded as JSON object or as CBOR map.  In both cases,
    
    nits "a JSON object", "a CBOR map".

FP: Done in PR.
    
40.       defined below.  All parameters are optional.  Table 1 provides a
       summary of the OSCORE_Security_Context parameters defined in this
       section.
    
    They're optional to appear in the OSCORE_Security_Context object that's
    included in a "cnf" value, but not necessarily optional for OSCORE to be
    usable.  What do we do for OSCORE when any given parameter is not
    present in this structure?  (Also, doesn't the AS always have to provide
    things like 'ms' and 'serverId'?)

FP: This is just the structure definition, which is aimed to be more general than just for this spec. For example, this could be reused to send only a part of these parameters, for example if only the salt + identifiers need to be updated. Yes, that is correct, not all parameters are optional when used in this profile, as mentioned in a previous point. ms, serverId are not optional. In an OSCORE Security Context: master secret, sender Id and recipient Id are not optional. Section 4.3 describes what happens if any of the parameters is not present:
“If any of the expected parameters is missing (e.g. any of the
   mandatory parameters from the AS, or the 'clientId', either received
   from the AS or in the 2.01 (Created) response from the RS), the
   client MUST stop the exchange, and MUST NOT derive the Security
   Context.  The client MAY restart the exchange, to get the correct
   security material.”
    
41.       | hkdf      | 4     | bstr / int     | COSE         | OSCORE HKDF   |
       |           |       |                | Algorithm    | value         |
       |           |       |                | Values       |               |
       |           |       |                | (HMAC-based) |               |
    
    Should be tstr, not bstr, right?

FP: Yes, OK.
    
    Also, why do we need the string form of either hkdf or alg?  More
    possibilities makes the decoder more complicated and increases the
    attack surface.

FP: because a COSE algorithm can be registered as a string (see https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8152#section-16.4 “Value”).
    
42.       | rpl       | 8     | bstr / int     |              | OSCORE Replay |
       |           |       |                |              | Window Type   |
       |           |       |                |              | and Size      |
    
    Should just be bstr (not int), right?
    
FP: Yes. OK.

43.       hkdf:  This parameter identifies the OSCORE HKDF Algorithm.  For more
          information about this field, see section 3.1 of
          [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  The values used MUST be
          registered in the IANA "COSE Algorithms" registry and MUST be
          HMAC-based HKDF algorithms.  The value can either be the integer
    
    It's a little unfortunate that we basically are relying on "I know it
    when I see it" for determining which algorithms are HKDF algorithms.

FP: Agreed, but we don’t really have another way to say this. If you or COSE experts (Jim) have any idea please let us know.    

    Also, "HKDF" expands to "HMAC-based Extract-and-Expand Key Derivation
    Function", i.e., is definitionally HMAC-based.  So this should be
    reworded to reflect the actual intent.

FP: Right, that is because COSE also defines HKDF using AES-MAC, see Table 12 of RFC8152, so we needed to specify that only HMAC-based can be used.
    
44.       alg:  This parameter identifies the OSCORE AEAD Algorithm.  For more
          information about this field, see section 3.1 of
          [I-D.ietf-core-object-security] The values used MUST be registered
          in the IANA "COSE Algorithms" registry and MUST be AEAD
          algorithms.  The value can either be the integer or the text
    
    Similarly, this seems to be "I know it when I see it".
    
FP: Yes.

45.       contextId:  This parameter identifies the security context as a byte
          string.  This identifier is used as OSCORE ID Context.  For more
          information about this field, see section 3.1 of
          [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  In JSON, the "contextID" value
          is a Base64 encoded byte string.  In CBOR, the "contextID" type is
          bstr, and has label 7.
    
    Do we need to forbid present-but-empty contextIds in order to avoid
    cryptographic collision with absent-contextId?

FP: The field being present but empty (i.e. value is the empty byte string) is not the same as absent, in OSCORE. So we do not need to forbid that.
    
46.       rpl:  This parameter is used to carry the OSCORE value, encoded as a
          bstr.  This parameter identifies the OSCORE Replay Window Size and
          Type value, which is a byte string.  For more information about
          this field, see section 3.1 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].
          In JSON, the "rpl" value is a Base64 encoded byte string.  In
          CBOR, the "rpl" type is bstr, and has label 8.
    
    I tried to follow the reference, but I couldn't really find a
    description of the encoding for this as a byte string (especially
    noteworthy since we claim that it represents both size and type).
    (Relatedly, I'm not sure why it's allowed to be either bstr or int.)
    
FP: Right, this is an old reference, where we actually gave a default encoding for rpl, I believe. Now this is entirely up to the application. I would keep this as bstr and specify that it is any format wrapped in a bstr.
Also I need to fix a couple of mistakes: “OSCORE value” is wrong; “Replay Window” and not "Size and Type". Also, I think we need to define a new IANA registry for rpl with 0 as default, so that applications can define their format.

    Section 4
    
47.    Can we get some CDDL or similar for both C-to-RS and RS-to-C (in the
    respective subsections)?
    
FP: I am not sure what you’d like to see in CDDL in this subsection, could you expand?

48.    I'd naively expect a section titled "Client-RS Communication" to include
    some discussion of normal protected OSCORE request/response pairs once
    the security context is fully established, but this initial section
    basically only talks about the authz-info interaction and disclaims that
    the subsections will cover anything else.

FP: Ok, will add some introductory text about the OSCORE security context being used of future OSCORE protected communication.
    
49.       The following subsections describe the details of the POST request
       and response to the authz-info endpoint between client and RS.  The
       client generates a nonce N1 and posts it together with the token that
       includes the materials provisioned by the AS to the RS.  The RS then
       derives a nonce N2 and use Section 3.2 of
    
    nits: "provisioned" again, and the RS is going to be generating a nonce
    from scratch, not deriving one from ... anything else, really.

FP: Done in PR.
    
50.       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security] to derive a security context based on
       a shared master secret and the two nonces, established between client
       and server.
    
    (The shared master secret is part of what the AS provisions^Wgives to
    the RS, right?)

FP: Yes, correct. Actually here it is also the clientId, serverId and contextId (if any) that are used for deriving the OSCORE context.
    
51.       Note that the proof-of-possession required to bind the access token
       to the client is implicitly performed by generating the shared OSCORE
       Security Context using the pop-key as master secret, for both client
       and RS.  An attacker using a stolen token will not be able to
       generate a valid OSCORE context and thus not be able to prove
       possession of the pop-key.
    
    It may be worth saying something roughly equating "proof of possesion
    performed by the RS" and "the RS authenticating itself to the client",
    since there is not an external action for server authentication.
    Also, ISTR getting some pushback on a different document that talked
    about an attacker with a "stolen token", as something that can steal a
    token from the client's local storage might also steal the associated
    key.  I forget if we ended up changing to some other phrasing or not,
    though :(

FP: Ok, will rephrase to “the RS authenticating itself” instead of “pop performed by the RS”. Also, what about using eavesdrop here instead?
    
    Section 4.1
    
52.       The client MUST generate a nonce N1 very unlikely to have been
       previously used with the same input keying material.  This profile
       RECOMMENDS to use a 64-bit long random number as nonce.  The client
    
    Why 64 instead of 128?  I know that 128 is enough without having to
    think about it; for 64 we have to be clear about what role the nonce is
    serving.
    
FP: We brought this up in the wg and everybody seemed to be ok with 64. We can go up to 128 if you think it’s better. Also consider that OSCORE appendix B2 has a similar setting and does some considerations about that, mentioning that "typically nonces of at least 8 bytes will be used". Maybe add a reference?
https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc8613#page-72 I brought it up as one of the points the wg should agree on.

53.       Note that the use of the payload and the Content-Format is different
       from what described in section 5.8.1 of [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz],
       which only transports the token without any CBOR wrapping.  In this
       profile, the client MUST wrap the token and N1 in a CBOR map.  The
       client MUST use the Content-Format "application/ace+cbor" defined in
       section 8.14 of [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz].  The client MUST include
       the access token using the correct CBOR label (e.g., "cwt" for CWT,
       "jwt" for JWT) and N1 using the 'cnonce' parameter defined in section
       5.1.2 of [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz].
    
    That's not what the 'cnonce' parameter is for -- 'cnonce' is protecting
    the RS against replay, but N1 is protecting the client.  I think we need
    to use a different name (and maybe define some integer map label
    values?) for this authz-info POST body.

FP: As mentioned, this was raised as an open point and ok by the wg (and particularly Ludwig and Jim).
    
54.       The access token MUST be encrypted, since it is transferred from the
       client to the RS over an unprotected channel.
    
    This is probably worth stating in Section 3.2 as well, where we discuss
    the AS-to-C token response in more detail.
    
FP: OK.

55.       Note that a client may be required to re-POST the access token, since
       an RS may delete a stored access token, due to lack of memory.
    
    I'd suggest using the phrase "at any time" and noting that the client
    will detect this by receiving an AS Request Creation Hints message since
    the RS treated the request as an Unauthorized Resource Request, perhaps:
    
    %  Note that a client may be required to re-POST the access token in
    %  order to complete a request, since an RS may delete a stored access
    %  token at any time, for example due to all storage space being
    %  consumed.  This situation is detected by the client when it receives
    %  an AS Request Creation Hints response.
    
FP: OK.

56.             Payload:
               {
                 "access_token": h'a5037674656d7053656e73 ...'
              (remainder of access token omitted for brevity)',
                 "cnonce": h'018a278f7faab55a'
               }
    
    This does not appear to be using either a "cwt" label or "jwt" label, as
    the second paragraph of the section would have us using.

FP: OK. Will use "cwt".
    
    Section 4.2
    
57.       token.  If the token is valid, the RS MUST respond to the POST
       request with 2.01 (Created).  If the token is valid but is associated
    
    We probably don't need to repeat the normative requirements from
    the core framework with normative keywords again.

FP: OK.
    
58.       to claims that the RS cannot process (e.g., an unknown scope), or if
       any of the expected parameters in the OSCORE_Security_Context is
    
    Hmm, "associated to claims that the RS cannot process" sounds like we're
    telling the RS to abort if the token includes any unrecognized claims,
    which IIUC is at odds with the OAuth 2.0 philosophy of ignoring
    unrecognized parameters.  (Hopefully someone will correct me if I'm
    misremembering that.)

FP: This paragraph is meant to mirror what specified in 5.8.1.1 of ace-oauth-authz:
If the claims cannot be obtained the RS MUST discard the token
      and, in case of an interaction via the authz-info endpoint, return
      an error message with a response code equivalent to the CoAP code
      4.00 (Bad Request).
Next, the RS MUST verify claims, if present, contained in the access
   token.  Errors are returned when claim checks fail, in the order of
   priority of this list:
   
59.       missing (e.g. any of the mandatory parameters from the AS), or if any
    
    nit: comma after "e.g.".

FP: Done in PR
    
60.       Additionally, the RS MUST generate a nonce N2 very unlikely to have
       been previously used with the same input keying material, and send it
       within the 2.01 (Created) response.  The payload of the 2.01
       (Created) response MUST be a CBOR map containing the 'cnonce'
       parameter defined in section 5.1.2 of [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz], set
       to N2.  This profile RECOMMENDS to use a 64-bit long random number as
       nonce.  Moreover, if the OSCORE_Security_Context in the token did not
    
    As above, we need to use a different name than 'cnonce', as it's
    performing a different role (this time, contributing entropy to the
    master secret).  (Also, if we change our recommendation about nonce
    length above we should do so here as well, of course.)
    
FP: OK, pending wg agreement, and OK.

61.       contain a 'clientId' parameter, the RS MUST generate an identifier,
       unique in the set of all its existing client identifiers, and send it
       in a 'clientId' parameter in the CBOR map as a CBOR bstr.  The RS MAY
       generate and send a 'ClientId' identifier even though the
       OSCORE_Security_Context contained such a parameter, in order to
       guarantee the uniqueness of the client identifier.  The RS MUST use
    
    I'm not sure I understand the case where the AS wouldn't be able to
    guarantee uniqueness of ClientId, and wonder if we could simplify by
    always having the AS make ID assignment.  Is there some more
    background/usage scenarios here that I'm missing?
    
FP: No that's it. The case I was trying to cover is having several AS cover the same resource at the same RS. Then we would have to have them synchronized for uniqueness of ClientId. But yes. Agree on removing this mechanism.

62.       When receiving an updated access token with updated authorization
       information from the client (see section Section 3.1), it is
       RECOMMENDED that the RS overwrites the previous token, that is only
       the latest authorization information in the token received by the RS
       is valid.  This simplifies for the RS to keep track of authorization
       information for a given client.
    
    [this same recommendation is already in the core framework]
    
FP: OK, will remove normative text and reference framework.

    Section 4.3
    
63.       the 'clientId' in the CBOR map in the payload of the response.  Then,
       the client MUST set the Master Salt of the Security Context created
       to communicate with the RS to the concatenation of salt, N1, and N2,
       in this order: Master Salt = salt | N1 | N2, where | denotes byte
       string concatenation, and where salt was received from the AS in
       Section 3.2.  The client MUST set the Master Secret and Recipient ID
    
    I think it's general best practice to use an injective mapping of the inputs
    to the Master Salt value (i.e., length-prefixes for the various fields, since
    there are no reserved octet values).

FP: OK, using CBOR encoded bstr (or b64 if JSON is used) should fix that.
    
64.       from the parameters received from the AS in Section 3.2.  The client
       MUST set the AEAD Algorithm, ID Context, HKDF, and Replay Window from
       the parameters received from the AS in Section 3.2, if present.  In
       case these parameters are omitted, the default values are used as
       described in section 3.2 of [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  The
    
    Ah, okay; I'd asked about default values earlier.  That said, if stock OSCORE
    ever changes the defaults we'd have to come up with a compatibility story for
    communication between old/new nodes.
    
FP: Yes. Maybe adding a version number to this context structure? I think this is a good idea.

65.       client MUST set the Sender ID from the 'clientId in the 2.01
       (Created) response, if present; otherwise, the client MUST set the
       Sender ID from the parameters received from the AS in Section 3.2.
    
    [As written, this has the clientId from the RS take precedence over the one
    from the AS when both are present.  I understand that the claimed
    justification is for the RS to be able to enforce clientId uniqueness, but it
    still feels risky, since the value from the RS is unauthenticated.]

FP: Let's remove this mechanism.
    
66.       If any of the expected parameters is missing (e.g. any of the
       mandatory parameters from the AS, or the 'clientId', either received
       from the AS or in the 2.01 (Created) response from the RS), the
       client MUST stop the exchange, and MUST NOT derive the Security
       Context.  The client MAY restart the exchange, to get the correct
       security material.
    
    I think this means "restart at the AS" but it's probably worth being very
    explicit about it.

FP: Yes, OK will clarify.

    Also, is there anything to be said about rate-limiting/backoff for persistent
    missing parameters?

FP: OK, will add a sentence about that.
    
67.       After sending the 2.01 (Created) response, the RS MUST set the Master
       Salt of the Security Context created to communicate with the client
       to the concatenation of salt, N1, and N2, in this order: Master Salt
       = salt | N1 | N2, where | denotes byte string concatenation, and
    
    [It might be worth breaking this computation off into a standalone piece of
    text that applies to both C and RS, including the edits for injectivity.]
    
FP: OK

68.       where salt was received from the AS in Section 4.2.  The RS MUST set
       the Master Secret, Sender ID and Recipient ID from the parameters,
       received from the client in the access token in Section 4.1 after
    
    nit: I'd place the emphasis more on "in the access token" or even "from the
    AS" rather than "from the client" -- the RS/AS preestablished relationship is
    what authenticates these values.

FP: Done in PR: "from the AS forwarded by the client".
    
69.       validation of the token as specified in Section 4.2.  The RS MUST set
    
    Does Section 4.2 really say much about validation other than "RS MUST verify
    the validity of the token"?

FP: well, that and points to 5.8.1 of ace-oauth-authz. I pointed to the framework not to duplicate the reference, but we can do that if you think it’s best.
    
70.       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  After that, the RS MUST derive the
       complete Security Context following section 3.2.1 of
       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security], and MUST associate this Security
       Context with the authorization information from the access token.
    
    side note: it's sometimes useful as a rhetorical device to have a discussion
    of the abstract data model the RS uses -- in this case, that it maintains a
    collection of Security Contexts with associated authorization information,
    for all the clients that it's currently communicating with, and that the
    authorization information is policy that's used as input to processing
    requests from those clients.  Otherwise, this text about "MUST associate" can
    be a bit vague to the reader.

FP: OK, will add this clarification in this section.
    
71.       The RS then uses this Security Context to verify the request and send
       responses to C using OSCORE.  If OSCORE verification fails, error
    
    (nit?) what is "the request"?  I don't think we've talked about a specific
    OSCORE request yet, so this would probably be better if talking about generic
    incoming requests from a given client.
    
FP: Done in PR: "verify requests and sends responses".

72.       responses are used, as specified in section 8 of
       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  Additionally, if OSCORE
       verification succeeds, the verification of access rights is performed
       as described in section Section 4.4.  The RS MUST NOT use the
       Security Context after the related token has expired, and MUST
       respond with a unprotected 4.01 (Unauthorized) error message.
    
    nit: I suggest "MUST respond with an unprotected [...] error message to
    requests received that correspond to a security context with an expired
    token" to tie it back to which requests are affected.

FP: Done in PR.
    
73.       If the exchange was an update of access rights, i.e. a new Security
    
    nit: comma after "i.e.".
    
FP: Done in PR.

74.       Context was derived from a client that already had a Security Context
       in place, the is RECOMMENDED to delete the old Security Context after
       OSCORE verification and verification of access rights succeed.  The
       RS MUST delete the Security Context if it deletes the access token
       associated to it.
    
    I'm not sure I understand what the workflow is, here -- I assume that the
    deletion of the old security context occurs after a successful update via
    the authz-info endpoint (as opposed to some particular OSCORE-protected
    request), but I don't know what "verification of access rights" could be
    performed at that time.  Aren't access rights mostly tied to a specific
    operation, or is this just supposed to be a more generic audience/scope
    check?

FP: The RS deletes the old token and the old security context only after successfully processing a request from the client, using the new token and security context. That includes OSCORE verification and also access rights verification, like any normal request. Is that not clear? How to make it clearer?
    
    Section 4.4
    
75.       The RS MUST follow the procedures defined in section 5.8.2 of
       [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz]: if an RS receives an OSCORE-protected
       request from a client, then the RS processes it according to
       [I-D.ietf-core-object-security].  If OSCORE verification succeeds,
       and the target resource requires authorization, the RS retrieves the
    
    nit(?): is it appropriate to say "requires additional authorization" (over
    the implicit authorization given to any authenticated client)?  I'm not sure
    if that would be confusing or not.
    
FP: I would think this is more confusing than clarifying because we don’t talk about implicit authorization in this document. We can make this change if other people agree that this formulation is better.

76.       authorization information from the access token associated to the
       Security Context.  The RS then MUST verify that the authorization
       information covers the resource and the action requested.
    
    In the vein of my previous note about an abstract data model, we may not want
    to be overly prescriptive about "retrieves [...] from the access token".
    Per-request introspection is allowed, as is caching the authorization
    information in a non-token local datastore.

FP: Ok, I understand but I am not sure how to implement this comment. “Retrieve” may be misinterpreted, but in my mind it can mean both by looking up caching info as well as introspecting. How to make this clearer?

    I'd also consider rephrasing to "MUST verify that the resource and action
    requested are authorized", since "covers" is perhaps a little vague.
    
FP: OK

77.       The response code MUST be 4.01 (Unauthorized) in case the client has
       not used the Security Context associated with the access token, or if
       RS has no valid access token for the client.  If RS has an access
    
    The causality here seems a bit weird; how would the RS know what token was
    intended just from an OSCORE request that's using a random or different
    security context?

FP: The RS needs to keep this association between Security Context and token. This first section covers the case where the client is using a sec ctx not associated to any token or where that sec ctx was not used before (so the full OSCORE setup did not go through). Different (“valid”) security context associated to a token is covered in the next section. Is there anything I am missing here?
    
78.       token for the client but not for the resource that was requested, RS
       MUST reject the request with a 4.03 (Forbidden).  If RS has an access
    
    I'd suggest rephrasing this to be in terms of authorization rather than
    "token for X", perhaps as "if the RS has an access token for the client but
    no actions are authorized on the target resource"

FP: OK
    
79.       token for the client but it does not cover the action that was
       requested on the resource, RS MUST reject the request with a 4.05
       (Method Not Allowed).
    
    Similarly, perhaps "but the requested action is not authorized".

FP: OK
    
    Also, don't both of these descriptions have high overlap with Section 5.8.2
    of the core framework?  Is it necessary to reiterate those behavior
    specifications?

FP: Yes, this whole second paragraph re-iterates that section. We can remove it, the only thing left will be to specify that “performed proof-of-possession” = “having an OSCORE security context established”
    
    Section 5
    
80.    Thank you for clearly stating that the OSCORE security contexts between RS/AS
    and C/AS must be established independently of any of the mechanisms defined
    in this document, and that the protocols used for the C/RS, C/AS, and RS/AS
    steps can be selected independently.

FP: Good that it's clear.
    
81.       Furthermore the requesting entity and the AS communicate using OSCORE
       ([I-D.ietf-core-object-security]) through the introspection endpoint
       as specified in section 5.7 of [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz] and through
       the token endpoint as specified in section 5.6 of
       [I-D.ietf-ace-oauth-authz].
    
    I'm not entirely sure what this sentence is trying to say -- it comes across
    a little bit as saying that when this document is in use, the indicated
    interactions also use OSCORE, but that of course can't be what's actually
    intended.  Perhaps just saying that the behavior of the introspection
    endpoing is specified in section 5.7 of [framework] and that of the token
    endpoint is specified in section 5.6 of [framework] would suffice?''

FP: No, this sentence wanted to add to the previous (“if OSCORE is used”), and just point to the framework’s section for the specific behaviours. Will rephrase.
    
    Section 6
    
82.       o  the client receives a number of 4.01 Unauthorized responses to
          OSCORE requests using the same security context.  The exact number
          needs to be specified by the application.
    
    Is this a global counter or does it get reset by a successful OSCORE
    response?

FP: I would say this gets reset by a successful OSCORE response. But probably the application would have to define that as well. Do we need to add any text about this?
    
83.       o  the client receives a new nonce in the 2.01 (Created) response
          (see Section 4.2) to a POST request to the authz-info endpoint,
          when re-posting a non-expired token associated to the existing
          context.
    
    Why is "non-expired" specifically relevant?

FP: because if it’s expired the RS will not accept that token. This was just for clarification.
What about adding a parenthesis “(non-expired)”?
    
84.       The RS MUST discard the current security context associated with a
       client when:
    
       o  Sequence Number space ends.
    
       o  Access token associated with the context expires.
    
    nit: we should make the grammar of the list elements parallel to the client's
    list, so "the Sequence Number space ends." and "the access token associated
    with the context expires".

FP: Done in PR.
    
    Section 7
    
85.    We talk about both nonces as needing to be "very unlikely to have been
    previously used", and it might be worth trying to quantify that (e.g.,
    "chance of inadvertent collision less than 2^-32").
    
FP: This is hard to quantify in a general case. But we can add some text about avoiding inadvertent collisions.

86.    As alluded to in my high-level point, we should have more discussion of
    the consequences of the authz-info exchange being completely
    unprotected.

FP: Let's discuss that in the point above.
    
87.       a secure binding between the request and the response(s).  Thus the
       basic OSCORE protocol is not intended for use in point-to-multipoint
       communication (e.g. multicast, publish-subscribe).  Implementers of
    
    nit: comma after "e.g.".

FP: Done in PR.
    
88.       provoke re-use.  If that is not guaranteed, nodes are still
       susceptible to re-using AEAD nonces and keys, in case the Security
       Context is lost, and on-path attacker replay messages.
    
    This text is talking about AEAD nonces, but the nonces (and 64-bit
    recommendation) previously discussed are the nonces used in the Master Salt
    (and thus Master Secret) calculation; we don't really talk about AEAD nonces
    specifically anywhere in the document, other than to point out the risk of
    (nonce, key) reuse.  IIUC, vulnerable nodes would need to reuse both the
    N1 or N2 values defined in this spec as well as the OSCORE partial IV in
    order to collide the AEAD (nonce, key) pair (noting that both key and common
    IV are influenced by the Master Salt).  That said, if the N1 generation is
    flawed it seems quite plausible that PIV generation is similarly flawed, so
    we are right to document the concern.
    Also, the grammar here is a little bit weird, so perhaps a rewording to:
    
    %  provoke re-use.  If that is not guaranteed, nodes are
    %  susceptible to re-use of AEAD (nonces, keys) pairs, especially since an on-path
    %  attacker can cause the client to use an arbitrary nonce for Security
    %  Context establishment.  Even partial loss of Security Context information
    %  can allow an on-path attacker to replay messages.
    
    though I'm not entirely sure I understand which replay scenarios you had in
    mind.
    
FP: I think the last sentence in your rewording is partially changing the intent of the paragraph. Partial loss does not allow attacker to replay messages; what was meant by that is that, if the context is lost (think reboot without use of persistent memory, where partial IV could reset to previously used IVs, and node’s nonce resets to previously used nonce) and at the same time the attacker replays an old message (so second nonce is previously used too), that creates the problem. I would just remove the last sentence of your reworded paragraph and would be fine with that.

89.       This profiles recommends that the RS maintains a single access token
    
    nit: "This profile" singular.
    
FP: Done in PR.

90.       Also, tokens may contradict each other which may lead the server to
       enforce wrong permissions.  If one of the access tokens expires
    
    Could you give me an example of the contradiction scenarios?  I see the
    "common" case as being roughly "Token T1 gives access to the set X of
    resources and token T2 gives access to a partially disjoint set Y of
    resources", but I don't know that such a scenario would be considered a
    "conflict".  To get a conflict I'd expect more like "token T1 indicates that
    access to X is to be denied, but token T2 indicates that access to X is to be
    allowed" with some sort of explicit negative ACL, but I don't think OAuth
    really has a concept of negative ACL.

FP: No, I meant what you describe as the common case. The contradiction coming from the fact that one token would give access to a set X of resource that the other token would not give access to. A server implementation might check only one token, which could lead to wrong permissions. Do we need to say anything else here?
    
    Section 8
    
91.    There might be a few more privacy considerations worth mentioning:
    
    - the token is sent in the clear to the authz-info endpoint, so if a single
      token is used with multiple audiences or RSes, a client that uses the same
      token from multiple locations can be tracked/correlated by the access
      token's value.

FP: OK

    - the nonces exchanged in the authz-info exchange are also sent in the clear,
      so using random nonces is best for privacy (as opposed to, e.g., a counter,
      that might leak some information).

FP: OK

    - the identifiers clientId/serverId that are created/assigned for this
      protocol have some privacy considerations; they overlap a lot with the core
      OSCORE considerations in terms of the potential privacy consequences but
      there might be a little more to say about guidelines for how the
      identifiers are generated.  If I'm reading OSCORE correctly, for the uses
      specified in this document only the clientId will actually go on the wire?

FP: that’s right, unless client and server swap roles, in which case also serverId (acting as client) could go on the wire. I thought OSCORE should have this covered. What additional details are missing here?

    - similarly, there may be considerations for the ID context values.

FP: same, referencing OSCORE should cover it, no?
    
    Section 9.1
    
92.       o  Profile Description: Profile for using OSCORE to secure
          communication between constrained nodes using the Authentication
          and Authorization for Constrained Environments framework.
    
    This is the registry for ACE profiles; "using the Authentication and
    Authorization for Constrained Envirornments framework" feels redundant.
    There's also perhaps something to say about defining "coap_oscore" for all
    three interaction flows even though the procedures for two of the three are
    essentially just "out of the scope of this specification", though having
    *some* identifier for "use OSCORE" is probably still useful.
    
FP: Ok, we can remove the last part. About the interaction flows between nodes, I am not sure what you mean, as by following definition https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-ace-oauth-authz-31#section-5.6.4.3 it is not mandatory for a profile to specify C-AS and RS-AS, those flows can be out of scope. Am I missing something?

    Section 9.2
    
93.       name  The JSON name requested (e.g., "ms").  Because a core goal of
          this specification is for the resulting representations to be
          compact, it is RECOMMENDED that the name be short.  This name is
          case sensitive.  Names may not match other registered names in a
          case-insensitive manner unless the Designated Experts state that
          there is a compelling reason to allow an exception.  The name is
    
    nit: I'd suggest s/state/determine/

FP: Done in PR
    
94.       CBOR label  The value to be used to identify this algorithm.  Key map
          labels MUST be unique.  The label can be a positive integer, a
    
    nit: s/Key map/Map key/

FP: Done in PR
    
95.          negative integer or a string.  Integer values between 0 and 255
          and strings of length 1 are designated as Standards Track Document
          required.  Integer values from 256 to 65535 and strings of length
          2 are designated as Specification Required.  Integer values of
          greater than 65535 and strings of length greater than 2 are
          designated as expert review.  Integer values less than -65536 are
          marked as private use.
    
    So use of negative integers from -65535 to -1 and positive integers greater
    than or equal to 65536 is not defined?

FP: OK Right we missed it. We will fix it.
    
    I'd also consider listing [I-D.ietf-core-object-security] as an
    additional reference for the initial entries, since that specifies the
    actual semantics of the fields in question.

FP: OK
    
    Section 9.3
    
96.    "OSCORE_Security_Context" feels like a somewhat long name in light of the
    previous commentary about shorter names being preferred. :)
    
FP: Typically this whole name should not be sent when CBOR is used (so in constrained environments). But we’ll shorten it, what about "Sec_Ctx"?

97.       o  Confirmation Method Description: OSCORE_Security_Context carrying
          the OSCORE Security Context parameters
    
    I'd suggest rewording the description to "parameters for using OSCORE
    per-message security with implicit key confirmation"
    
FP: Ok, still would like to keep OSCORE_Security_Context (or whatever the structure will be called) somewhere in the description.

    Section 9.4
    
98.

    [same suggested rewording]

FP: OK
    
    Section 9.5
    
99.     Thank you for indicating in which direction the various considerations should
    sway the experts' decisions, as opposed to just what the experts should
    consider. :)

FP: good.
    
100.       The IANA registry established in this document is defined as expert
       review.  This section gives some general guidelines for what the
    
    nit: I suggest "defined to use the Expert Review registration policy".

FP: Done in PR
    
101          The zones tagged as private use are intended for testing purposes
          and closed environments, code points in other ranges should not be
          assigned for testing.
    
    nit: comma splice

FP: TIL comme splices. Done in PR.
    
102.       o  Specifications are required for the standards track range of point
          assignment.  Specifications should exist for specification
          required ranges, but early assignment before a specification is
          available is considered to be permissible.  Specifications are
    
    side note: this is a little awkward, as RFC 7120 formally does not allow
    "early allocations" for the "Expert Review" policy, so there is not a formal
    procedure in place to review and expire early allocations that end up not
    being needed.  It might be worth something to chat with the IANA table about
    in Vancouver.
    
FP: Sure, we will check with IANA. We got inspired by (read shamelessly stole from) COSE here.

    Section 10.2
    
103.    We might get some sticklers asking for the terminology references to be made
    normative, but I'm not concerned about it one way or the other for now.
    
FP: OK, will keep in mind.

    Appendix A
    
104.    Thank you for assembling this in list form for me.
    Do we expect to keep this content in the final RFC?  If we do, we should
    resynchronize to the current list in Appendix C of the framework :)

FP: Definitely should resynchronize. Yes I’d like this content to stay.
    
105.       o  how/if the authz-info endpoint is protected: Security protocol
          above
    
    I thought authz-info was fully unprotected, per Section 4.1's "The authz-info
    endpoint is not protected, nor are the responses from this resource."

FP: OK, will fix.
    
    Thanks,
    
    Ben
    
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