[Acme] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-acme-caa-06: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 20 May 2019 13:11 UTC

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Subject: [Acme] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-acme-caa-06: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-acme-caa-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Hugo, thank you for the work put into this document. Adding some examples was a
good idea.

I found it interesting that the security section represents roughly 50% of the
document ;-)

I have two comments and one nit. See below.

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 2 --

Please use RFC 8174 boiler template for this section ;-)

-- Section 3 --

The word 'applicable' is used but never strictly defined. If defined in another
document, please add a reference (perhaps in the section 2), else please define
it.

== NIT ==

-- abstract --

Expand CAA, CA in the abstract ?