Re: [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7336)
Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> Mon, 06 February 2023 23:45 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7336)
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This is hilarious — the errata reporting form apparently ate my double backslashes. Here is the corrected Corrected Text: oid = text .regexp "([0-2])((\\.0)|(\\.[1-9][0-9]*))*” And here is how I would write this, having been bitten by backslashes in RFCs before: oid = text .regexp "([0-2])(([.]0)|([.][1-9][0-9]*))*” (Actually, I would write this: oid = text .regexp "[0-2]([.](0|([1-9][0-9]*)))*” …but this is a style issue.) Grüße, Carsten > On 2023-02-07, at 00:35, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9115, > "An Automatic Certificate Management Environment (ACME) Profile for Generating Delegated Certificates". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7336 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Technical > Reported by: Carsten Bormann <cabo@tzi.org> > > Section: Appendix A > > Original Text > ------------- > oid = text .regexp "([0-2])((\.0)|(\.[1-9][0-9]*))*" > > > Corrected Text > -------------- > oid = text .regexp "([0-2])((\.0)|(\.[1-9][0-9]*))*" > > > Notes > ----- > Backslashes need to be doubled in CDDL strings (as they are done in Appendix B). > > An alternative fix would be to replace \. by [.] > > Note that the equivalent fix is not required for > > regtext = text .regexp "([^\*].*)|([\*][^\*].*)|([\*][\*].+)" > > as the fact that the single backslashes have no effect is irrelevant here — the backslashes are not needed in the character classes [...]. > As an editorial enhancement, the backslashes could be entirely removed from this line. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please > use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or > rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party > can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC9115 (draft-ietf-acme-star-delegation-09) > -------------------------------------- > Title : An Automatic Certificate Management Environment (ACME) Profile for Generating Delegated Certificates > Publication Date : September 2021 > Author(s) : Y. Sheffer, D. López, A. Pastor Perales, T. Fossati > Category : PROPOSED STANDARD > Source : Automated Certificate Management Environment > Area : Security > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG
- [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7336) RFC Errata System
- Re: [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7… Carsten Bormann
- Re: [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7… Thomas Fossati
- Re: [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7… Alice Russo
- Re: [Acme] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9115 (7… Carsten Bormann