[Acme] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-07

Linda Dunbar via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 04 November 2021 03:19 UTC

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Subject: [Acme] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-07

Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-acme-authority-token-07
Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
Review Date: 2021-11-03
IETF LC End Date: 2021-11-16
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

I am a little confused if this draft is to describe the challenges of ACME ? 
or if the term  "ACME challenges" in the title is used to represent something
special? Is "Authority Token challenge"  to represent the challenge of
Authority Token?

What is the difference between the "Authority Token Challenge element" and the
"Authority Tokey Challenge object"?

Does the "ACME Challenge" the same as the "ACME challenge"?
Can authors add the definitions to the Terminology section?

Thank you very much
Linda Dunbar

[Acme] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-acme… Linda Dunbar via Datatracker
Re: [Acme] [Last-Call] Genart last call review of… Lars Eggert