Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt

Danny Alex Lachos Perez <dlachosper@gmail.com> Sun, 08 July 2018 17:24 UTC

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Subject: Re: [alto] FW: I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
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Hello Sabine and WG

I reviewed Introduction, S1, S2, S3, and S4 of the Unified Property
draft. My comments are in the attached file (marked with [DANNY]).

Ss

Danny Lachos


On Fri, Jun 29, 2018 at 3:11 PM Randriamasy, Sabine (Nokia -
FR/Paris-Saclay) <sabine.randriamasy@nokia-bell-labs.com>; wrote:

> Hello,
>
> The main updates in this new version relate to the consistency procedure
> between ALTO Address Type Registry and
>  ALTO Entity Domain Registry as discussed during the ALTO WG session in
> London. This is addressed in section 9.  IANA Considerations, where 9.2
> specifies the ALTO Entity Domain Registry and 9.2.1. proposes an algorithm
> to ensure consistency between both registries.
>
> Other updates include:
> - in section 1. Introduction: a paragraph introducing ALTO Entity domains,
> - In section 6.3, some rewording to clarify between "pid" and "PID" to
> avoid headaches,
> - section 7.3 example IRD: name update for the Endpoint property resource
> - section 7.4: example transaction
> - Section 10 References: updates and reformatting
> - usage of expression "ALTO Entity Domain" throughout the document
>
> Your feeback will be highly appreciated
>
> Thanks
> Sabine, Jensen, Dawn
>
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> Subject: [alto] I-D Action: draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
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>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization WG
> of the IETF.
>
>         Title           : Unified Properties for the ALTO Protocol
>         Authors         : Wendy Roome
>                           Shiwei Dawn Chen
>                           Sabine Randriamasy
>                           Y. Richard Yang
>                           Jingxuan Jensen Zhang
>         Filename        : draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04.txt
>         Pages           : 30
>         Date            : 2018-06-29
>
> Abstract:
>    This document extends the Application-Layer Traffic Optimization
>    (ALTO) Protocol [RFC7285] by generalizing the concept of "endpoint
>    properties" to domains of other entities, and by presenting those
>    properties as maps, similar to the network and cost maps in ALTO.
>
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new/
>
> There are also htmlized versions available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-alto-unified-props-new-04
>
>
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