Re: [alto] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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From: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>
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Subject: Re: [alto] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT)
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Hi Qin, Med, On Fri, Mar 04, 2022 at 10:27:15AM +0000, Qin Wu wrote: > Hi, Martin and Ben, and authors of path vector draft: > I believe Martin’s proposal is straightforward, > Med and I have put up a new draft that updates RFC7285 and creates a cost mode registry. > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-bw-alto-cost-mode-01 Wow, that was fast! Yes, this looks like a good approach. Having read through it, my only comment is that a sentence or two on deployment considerations might be useful. If I remember correctly, the protocol is mostly client-driven and the server indicates capabilities, so there should be a pretty straightforward path for in-band negotiation of using new cost modes. Regardless, it would also be the case that protocol authors can indicate that the new cost mode is applicable to new ALTO resources when defining them. > To accelerate the progress of draft-ietf-path-vector which doesn’t need to wait for another telechat, our chairs’ proposal to authors of draft-ietf-path-vector, is > draft-ietf-path-vector makes reference to this new cost mode draft and register the new mode. Hope this resolve Ben’s DISCUSS. > Does this work for you, @Ben @Martin @Kai. Yes, this will work -- when draft-ietf-alto-path-vector references this new document that will alleviate my DISCUSS concern. Thanks, Ben > -Qin &Med > 发件人: Martin Duke [mailto:martin.h.duke@gmail.com] > 发送时间: 2022年3月4日 4:26 > 收件人: Kai Gao <kaigao@scu.edu.cn> > 抄送: Benjamin Kaduk <kaduk@mit.edu>; IETF ALTO <alto@ietf.org>; alto-chairs <alto-chairs@ietf.org>; The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-alto-path-vector@ietf.org > 主题: Re: [alto] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) > > Ben and Kai, > > Thanks for calling attention to this problem. > > In RFC 7285, there is no IANA registry for Cost Mode, because, as you point out Sec 10.5<https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc7285.html#section-10.5> says the Mode MUST be "ordinal" or "numerical". > > RFC 8896, though not listed as a document that updates RFC 7285, certainly implies it is doing so in Sec 3.3.1:<https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8896.html#name-alto-cost-calendar-for-all-> > > An ALTO Cost Calendar is well suited for values encoded in the "numerical" mode. Actually, a Calendar can also represent metrics in other modes considered as compatible with time-varying values. For example, types of cost values (such as JSONBool) can also be calendared (as their value may be 'true' or 'false' depending on given time periods or likewise) values represented by strings, such as "medium", "high", "low", "blue", and "open". > > and in 3.3.2: > > As a consequence, when a metric is available as a Calendar array, it also MUST be available as a single value, as required by [RFC7285<https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8896.html#RFC7285>]. The Server, in this case, provides the current value of the metric to either Calendar-aware Clients not interested in future or time-based values or Clients implementing [RFC7285<https://www.rfc-editor.org/rfc/rfc8896.html#RFC7285>] only. > > then in Sec 4.3 there are fictitious examples of string Cost Modes, etc. > > I'm not sure that any of that is helpful, but RFC8896 is at least a worked example of delivering an array of costs without coining a new Cost Mode. Unfortunately, this is an array of strings, not an array of numericals or ordinals. > > I'm not sure I see a way forward other than a short new PS draft that updates 7285 and creates a Cost Mode registry. Other ideas? > > > > > > On Thu, Mar 3, 2022 at 9:51 AM <kaigao@scu.edu.cn<mailto:kaigao@scu.edu.cn>> wrote: > Hi Ben, > > Thanks a lot for the review. The comments are really helpful. We have proposed texts for most of the comments except for calculating content-lengths and the security-related comments, which we will come up with some proposal tomorrow. Please see our feedback inline. > > Best, > Kai > > > > -----Original Messages----- > > From: "Benjamin Kaduk via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> > > Sent Time: 2022-03-03 17:53:16 (Thursday) > > To: "The IESG" <iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>> > > Cc: alto-chairs@ietf.org<mailto:alto-chairs@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-alto-path-vector@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-alto-path-vector@ietf.org>, alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> > > Subject: [alto] Benjamin Kaduk's Discuss on draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-22: (with DISCUSS and COMMENT) > > > > Benjamin Kaduk has entered the following ballot position for > > draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-22: Discuss > > > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all > > email addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this > > introductory paragraph, however.) > > > > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/about/groups/iesg/statements/handling-ballot-positions/ > > for more information about how to handle DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector/ > > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > DISCUSS: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > The IANA Considerations section seems incomplete. > > Looking over the registries at > > https://www.iana.org/assignments/alto-protocol/alto-protocol.xhtml and > > comparing against the mechanisms defined in this document, it seems that > > we need to register the "ane-path" Cost Metric. > > Thanks for pointing that out. We will add a new section to register the cost metric. > > > More worryingly, there is > > no registry on that page in which the "array" cost mode could be > > registered, and it seems that using any value other than "numerical" or > > "ordinal" would violate a "MUST" in §10.5 of RFC 7285. This seems to > > present some procedural difficulties, especially now that this document is > > targeting Experimental status rather than Proposed Standard (which, to be > > clear, I think was the right thing to do). > > Indeed this is a big issue. As it also doesn't make sense if we use either ordinal or numerical as the cost mode, we cannot fall back to what is compatible with RFC 7285. Here is what we have in mind: first we make it clear that the new cost mode will violate RFC 7285; second, we restrict the use of the cost mode to only the ALTO information resources that enable this extension. Here is the proposed text: > > Note that the new cost mode violates the requirements that cost mode MUST either > be "numerical" or "ordinal" in Section 10.5 of {{RFC7285}}. To avoid > compatibility issues, an ALTO server MUST NOT use this cost mode in an ALTO > information resource that does not enable this extension. > > > > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > COMMENT: > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > > > Thanks for fleshing out the security considerations section substantially > > in recent revisions, and thanks to Sam Weiler for the multiple secdir > > reviews. While I agree with Sam that it would be nice to be able to list > > examples of non-DRM technical measures to protect the confidentiality of > > sensitive path vector information, I can't actually think of any that > > would be worth listing, myself. So we may have to proceed with the > > current text (unless you have further ideas, of course). > > > > It looks like the VersionTag.tag value of "d827f484cb66ce6df6b5077cb8562b0a" > > is used in a few different examples. While being associated with > > different VersionTag.ResourceID values is sufficient to distinguish the > > uses from each other, it seems like these examples might be more > > enlightening if distinct VersionTag.tag values were used for the distinct > > resources. > > Very good suggestion. We will use different version tags in different examples. > > > > > Section 1 > > > > Predicting such information can be very complex without the help of > > ISPs [BOXOPT]. [...] > > > > I'm not entirely sure which part(s) of [BOXOPT] are being referenced here. > > Their scheme seems to involve producing a privacy-preserving scheme for > > resource allocation that does involve exchnages between client and > > network, just not ones that reveal sensitive information. Did I miss a > > part where they compare against a scenario where the network/ISP does not > > provide input? (I only skimmed the paper.) > > The paper is mainly referenced because of its analysis on the NP-hardness of predicting the values without the help of ISPs (in the introduction). How about we use the following text to make it clear? > > Predicting such information can be very complex without the help of > ISPs, for example, [BOXOPT] has shown that finding the optimal > bandwidth reservation for multiple flows is NP-hard without > further information than whether a reservation succeeds. > > > > > Section 4.1 > > > > * The ALTO server must expose abstract information on the properties > > of the ANEs used by "eh1 -> eh2" and "eh1 -> eh4", e.g., the > > available bandwidth between "eh1 - sw1", "sw1 - sw5", "sw5 - sw7", > > "sw5 - sw6", "sw6 - sw7", "sw7 - sw2", "sw7 - sw4", "sw2 - eh2", > > "sw4 - eh4" in Case 1. > > > > Does it actually need to expose exactly the available bandwidth between > > all those listed pairs of entities? I would have thought that some of the > > details could be abstracted away. > > Not really. Actually for this use case the information can be abstracted as linear constraints. Maybe we should make this more explicit by adding the following text: > > * The ALTO server must expose abstract information on the properties > of the ANEs used by "eh1 -> eh2" and "eh1 -> eh4". For example, > an ALTO server can either expose the available bandwidth between > "eh1 - sw1", "sw1 - sw5", "sw5 - sw7", "sw5 - sw6", "sw6 - sw7", > "sw7 - sw2", "sw7 - sw4", "sw2 - eh2", "sw4 - eh4" in Case 1, or > expose 3 abstract elements "A", "B" and "C", which represent the > linear constraints that define the same capacity region in Case 1. > > > > > Section 4.2.1 > > > > For example, assume hosts "a", "b", > > "c" are in site 1 and hosts "d", "e", "f" are in site 2, and there > > > > In Figure 5, I see something that looks like an entry for [d] in the "Site > > 1" part, and an entry for [c] in the "Site 2" part. I'm not sure if > > that's just an attempt to indicate the directionality of the core backbone > > or something else. > > Yes. The figure is trying to illustrate a flow across sites from host [c] to host [d]. The reason why [d] is shown in Site 1 is to illustrate that the traffic to [d] goes to the backbone in Site 1's network. > > > > > Section 6.4 > > > > Note that these property types do not depend on any information > > resource. As such, their ResourceID part must be empty. > > > > Does this mean that the '.' is absent as well? > > > > Yes, indeed. We will make this clear with the following text: > > Note that these property types do not depend on any information > resource. As such, the EntityPropertyName MUST only have the > EntityPropertyType part. > > > Section 6.5.2 > > > > Note that this cost mode only requires the cost value to be a JSON > > array of JSONValue. However, an ALTO server that enables this > > extension MUST return a JSON array of ANEName (Section 6.1) when the > > cost metric is "ane-path". > > > > If we're going to require that the cost mode "array" only be used with an > > array of ANEName, then would it make more sense to call the cost mode > > "anearray", leaving the generic "array" for a more generic behavior? > > > > This design is actually discussed in early versions of this document. See [1]. The main point is that "cost-mode" is the type of the value and "cost-metric" is the meaning of the value. I think maybe we can put this as a constraint to the cost metric instead of the cost mode, as proposed below: > > [1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-alto-path-vector-02#section-4.1.3 > > This cost metric MUST be used when the cost mode is "array" unless > explicitly specified by another extension. An ALTO server MUST > ensure the returned cost value is an array of ANENames. The client > MUST also check that each element contained in the array is an > ANEName (Section 6.1). Otherwise, the client MUST discard the > response and SHOULD follow the instructions in Section 8.3.4.3 of > [RFC7285] to handle the error. > > > Section 6.6 > > > > DOMAIN-NAME: DOMAIN-NAME has the same format as dot-atom-text > > specified in Section 3.2.3 of [RFC5322]. It must be the domain > > name of the ALTO server. > > > > (somewhat editorial) is there always exactly one domain name of the ALTO > > server (vs. more than one)? > > > > Yes. I think so. In the IRD, each ALTO service is associated with exactly one uri and hence has a unique domain name. > > > Section 7.2.4 > > > > object { > > [EntityPropertyName ane-property-names<0..*>;] > > } PVFilteredCostMapCapabilities : FilteredCostMapCapabilities; > > > > with fields: > > > > Up in §7.2.3 we didn't repeat any of the fields from the base type we > > inherited from. Here we do, but (apparently) only because we have more to > > say about them, e.g., new restrictions on the cost-type-names field to > > include the Path Vector cost type. Do we want to mention that some fields > > are repeated because we make their definiton more specific for the > > PVFilteredCostMapCapabilities usage? > > Very good suggestion. We intend to put the new field after "with fields" and then insert a sentence to explicitly say that the others have specific restrictions. Here is the proposed text: > > > ane-property-names: ... > > This extension also introduces additional restrictions for the > following fields: > > cost-type-names: ... > cost-constraints: ... > > > > > Also, since we're repeating most of the FilteredCostMapCapabilities > > fields, is it worth also defining max-cost-types for completeness? > > This extension does not need modification to the max-cost-types field. With the proposed change to the previous comment, maybe we can skip max-cost-types? > > > > > Section 7.2.6 > > > > The "Content-Type" header of the response MUST be "multipart/related" > > as defined by [RFC2387] with the following parameters: > > > > This could be read as saying that all three parameters are mandatory, but > > the actual description for "start" includes the phrase "if present", > > implying that it is optional. Some more clarity would be helpful > > (especially relating to whether "boundary" is optional or mandatory, which > > RFC 2387 itself does not actually clarify directly). > > Good point. We explicitly specify for each parameter whether it is mandatory or optional. For example: > > start: The start parameter is as defined in [RFC2387] and is > optional. > > boundary: The boundary parameter is as defined in [RFC2387] and is > mandatory. > > > > > * The Path Vector part MUST include "Content-ID" and "Content-Type" > > [...] > > RESOURCE-ID in the "Content-ID" of the Path Vector part. The > > "meta" field MUST also include the "dependent-vtags" field, whose > > value is a single-element array to indicate the version tag of the > > network map used, where the network map is specified in the "uses" > > attribute of the multipart Filtered Cost Map resource in IRD. > > > > Just to confirm, there would not be a need to include in this > > "dependent-vtags" field any dependent resources relating to persistent > > ANEs? > > The vtags of dependent resources are used by the property map part and here it's for the Path Vector part (which is essentially an ALTO cost map). Thus, the interpretation of the Path Vector part only depends on the network map. > > > > Vector part MUST be included in the "dependent-vtags". If > > "persistent-entity-id" is requested, the version tags of the > > dependent resources that MAY expose the entities in the response > > MUST also be included. > > > > This seems a surprising use of the normative MAY, to me. > > Thanks for pointing this out. This should not be a normative MAY. > > > > > HTTP/1.1 200 OK > > Content-Length: 821 > > Content-Type: multipart/related; boundary=example-1; > > > > I'm having a hard time reproducing this Content-Length value. Could you > > double-check it? > > > Thanks for the comment. I save the examples and use curl to calculate the value. The new value is 859. > > > Section 7.3.3 > > > > POST /ecs/pv HTTP/1.1 > > Host: alto.example.com<http://alto.example.com> > > Accept: multipart/related;type=application/alto-endpointcost+json, > > application/alto-error+json > > Content-Length: 222 > > > > I'm getting a length of 226 or 227 (depending on newline at end of file); > > please confirm that 222 is correct. > > > The new calculated value is 227. > > > Section 7.3.6 > > > > boundary: The boundary parameter is as defined in [RFC2387]. > > > > As I alluded to above, the boundary parameter is actually defined in RFC > > 2045; the only appearance in RFC 2387 is in two examples. > > Thanks for the pointer. I checked RFC 2045 and see it actually refers to RFC 2046 (section 5.1.1) for the format of boundary. How about we use RFC 2046 instead? > > > > > The body of the Path Vector part MUST be a JSON object with the > > same format as defined in Section 11.5.1.6 of [RFC7285] when the > > "cost-type" field is present in the input parameters and MUST be a > > JSON object with the same format as defined in Section 4.1.3 of > > [RFC8189] if the "multi-cost-types" field is present. The JSON > > > > I think §4.2.3 of RFC 8189 is somewhat more relevant than §4.1.3, here. > > Yes indeed. We will change 4.1.3 to 4.2.3. > > > > > The body of the Unified Property Map part MUST be a JSON object > > with the same format as defined in Section 4.6 of > > [I-D.ietf-alto-unified-props-new]. [...] > > > > Is §4.6 the right reference here? I don't see much defining a JSON format > > in that section or subsections. > > Thanks for pointing that out. It should be section 7.6 now. > > > > > Vector part MUST be included in the "dependent-vtags". If > > "persistent-entity-id" is requested, the version tags of the > > dependent resources that MAY expose the entities in the response > > MUST also be included. > > > > As above, this is an unusual use of the normative "MAY". > > We will change it to "may". > > > > > HTTP/1.1 200 OK > > Content-Length: 810 > > Content-Type: multipart/related; boundary=example-1; > > type=application/alto-endpointcost+json > > > > Continuing the theme, please check this Content-Length as well. > > The new calculated value is 845 and we will check the content-length for all examples in the document. > > > > > Section 8.4 > > > > As mentioned in Section 6.5.1, an advanced ALTO server may obfuscate > > the response in order to preserve its own privacy or conform to its > > own policies. [...] > > > > Is §6.5.1 the correct reference? The word "obfuscate" does not appear > > therein that I can see. > > Thanks for pointing that out. There was a paragraph in early revisions on obfuscation in 6.5.1 but was later moved into security considerations. Here is the proposed text: > > Under certain scenarios where the traversal order is not crucial, an > ALTO server implementation may choose to not follow strictly the > physical traversal order and may even obfuscate the order > intentionally to preserve its own privacy or conform to its own > policies. > > > > > Section 8.5 > > > > Is there anything to say about updates needing to be paired in the same > > way/for the same reasons we have to use multipart/related to get a > > consistent picture of the path vector cost map and its associated ANE > > property map? Or perhaps in §9.3 instead? > > > > Thanks for the comment. We feel 9.3 is more appropriate and below is the proposed text: > > Additionally, the incremental updates of the Path > Vector part and the Property Map part MUST be published separately, > where the substream ID of each part MUST have the following format: > > substream-id '.' part-resource-id > > where "substream-id" is the substream ID of the Path Vector request > (e.g., "ecspvsub1" in Section 8.5) and "part-resource-id" is the Part > resource ID (e.g., "ecsmap" for the Path Vector part and "propmap" > for the Property Map part in Section 8.5). > > > Section 8.6 > > > > The second part is the same as in Section 8.4 > > > > It seems only analogous, not "the same as", to me -- this example uses > > aggregated ANEs but §8.3 used the full topology of Figure 10. > > The second part is actually the same as the second (obfuscated) example in Section 8.4. However, to avoid ambiguity, we propose to use the following text instead: > > The second part contains a Property Map that maps the ANEs to their > requested properties. > > > > > "endpoint-cost-map": { > > "ipv4:192.0.2.34": { > > "ipv4:192.0.2.2": [[ "NET3", "AGGR1" ], 1], > > "ipv4:192.0.2.50": [[ "NET3", "AGGR2" ], 1] > > }, > > "ipv6:2001:db8::3:1": { > > "ipv6:2001:db8::4:1": [[ "NET3", "AGGR2" ], 1] > > > > Is it really plausible to use the same routing cost of 1 for all three > > paths? > > > We use different routing cost values as below: > > "endpoint-cost-map": { > "ipv4:192.0.2.34": { > "ipv4:192.0.2.2": [[ "NET3", "AGGR1" ], 3], > "ipv4:192.0.2.50": [[ "NET3", "AGGR2" ], 2] > }, > "ipv6:2001:db8::3:1": { > "ipv6:2001:db8::4:1": [[ "NET3", "AGGR2" ], 2] > > > Section 11 > > > > Streaming updates of max-reservable-bandwidth seems to provide basically > > an equivalent information stream as to what paths have been reserved (and > > their bandwidth). That information might be differently sensitive than > > the primary network information we're exposing with the path-vector > > methodology, so we should probably mention this "information leakage" > > channel and give some guidance about what server behaviors might mitigate > > the leakage (e.g., batching updates, though I suspect that the policy for > > doing so in a way that minimizes information leakage will be about as hard > > a problem to solve as padding policies are in general). > > True if the server is returning all physical links on the paths. However, a major point of introducing (ephemeral) abstract network element is trying to hide such information. For example, with the obfuscation methods (e.g., only returning the linear constraints), only the "bottlenecks" will be revealed and their orders can be arbitrary. We did say in section 11 that these obfuscation methods should be considered/adopted (e.g., reference [NOVA]), though. Do you think we should make this more specific for the "max-reservable-bandwidth" property? > > > > > I'm a little surprised that we didn't mention anything about persistent > > ANEs here (which would be a great way to contrast with the obfuscation > > that ephemeral ANEs provide). > > Good point. We will think about this and propose some new text soon. > > > > > MIME parsers have historically been a recurring source of > > security-relevant bugs in other contexts. Perhaps that's sufficiently > > well known to not need restating here, though. > > > > For risk type (3), an ALTO server MUST use dynamic mappings from > > ephemeral ANE names to underlying physical entities. Thus, ANE names > > contained in the Path Vector responses to different clients or even > > for different request from the same client SHOULD point to different > > physical entities. [...] > > > > The guidance of "SHOULD point to different physical entities" doesn't seem > > quite right. If the ANE abstraction actually attempted to maximize the > > number of distinct physical entities represented, that seems lke it would > > make graph reconstruction easier, rather than harder. Perhaps it is > > better to give guidance about noncorrelation over time of the ANE > > name/physical element mapping, or even guidance to just use randomized ANE > > names. > > > > The sentence is trying to say that the same ANEName (e.g., ane1) should not point to the same entity. We agree the guidance might be misleading and the randomized ANE names can be a good option. We will propose the new text soon. > > > Section 13.1 > > > > I don't think RFC 4271 needs to be classified as normative; we seem to > > only reference it as an analogy for the Path Vector/AS Path. > > Good point. We will make it informative. > > > > > Section 13.2 > > > > [BOXOPT] Xiang, Q., Yu, H., Aspnes, J., Le, F., Kong, L., and Y.R. > > Yang, "Optimizing in the dark: Learning an optimal > > solution through a simple request interface", Proceedings > > of the AAAI Conference on Artificial Intelligence 33, > > 1674-1681 , 2019. > > > > It looks like this is https://doi.org/10.1609/aaai.v33i01.33011674 ; if > > so, including the DOI link would be very helpful for readers. > > > > That's just the one I happend to go pull up; DOIs for the other papers (if > > available) should be included, too. > > OK. We will add the DOI link for each academic paper. > > > > > NITS > > > > Section 1 > > > > Map that contains the properties requested for these ANEs. To > > enforce consistency and improve server scalability, this document > > uses the "multipart/related" message defined in [RFC2387] to return > > the two maps in a single response. > > > > I think it's more typical to say "content type" than "message" in this > > context. > > We will modify as suggested. > > > > Section 3 > > > > performance of traffic. An ANE can be a physical device such as a > > router, a link or an interface, or an aggregation of devices such > > as a subnetwork, or a data center. > > > > I think we do not want a comma before "or a data center", since the data > > center is just another example of an aggregation of devices. > > > We will modify as suggested. > > > Section 4.1 > > > > performance. The capacity region information for those flows will > > benefit the scheduling. However, Cost Maps as defined in [RFC7285] > > can not reveal such information. > > > > I'm not sure I know what "capacity region information" is; did we mean > > "region capacity information" (or maybe "Knowledge of the relevant > > capacity regions for those flows")? > > We change the term to "constraints on feasible rate allocations of those flows" which may be clearer. > > > > > With the ALTO Cost Map, the cost between PID1 and PID2 and between > > PID1 and PID4 will be 100 Mbps. The client can get a capacity region > > > > I'd suggest "will both be". > > We will modify as suggested. > > > > Section 4.2.1 > > > > With the Path Vector extension, a site can reveal the bottlenecks > > inside its own network with necessary information (such as link > > capacities) to the ALTO client, instead of providing the full > > topology and routing information. [...] > > > > I'd suggest adding "or no bottleneck information at all". > > > We will modify as suggested. > > > Section 4.2.2 > > > > in various documents (e.g., [SEREDGE] and [MOWIE]). Internet Service > > Providers may deploy multiple layers of CDN caches, or more generally > > service edges, with different latency and available resources > > including number of CPU cores, memory in Gigabytes (G), and storage > > measured in Terabytes (T). > > > > The units are probably not relevant for the abstract scenario, and would > > only become relevant when we start introducing Figure 6 as a specific > > instantiation of the multi-layer model. > > > > We propose the following text: > > ... Internet Service > Providers may deploy multiple layers of CDN caches, or more generally > service edges, with different latency and available resources > including number of CPU cores, memory, and storage. > > For example, Figure 6 illustrates a typical edge-cloud scenario where > memory is measured in Gigabytes (G) and storage is measured in > Terabytes (T). > > > Section 5.1.3 > > > > Specifically, the available properties for a given resource are > > announced in the Information Resource Directory as a new capability > > called "ane-property-names". The selected properties are specified > > in a filter called "ane-property-names" in the request body, and the > > response includes and only includes the selected properties for the > > ANEs in the response. > > > > Going from the first to second sentence, we switch from using the string > > "ane-property-names" to refer to the available properties announced in the > > IRD, to using it to refer to the properties that a client supplies in a > > path vector query for use in filtering the response results. To help the > > reader make this transition smoothly, I suggest rephrasing the transition, > > perhaps to something like "The properties selected by a client as being of > > interest are specified in the subsequent Path Vector queries using the > > filter called 'ane-property-names'." > > > Good point. We will modify as suggested. > > > Section 5.3 > > > > 1. Since ANEs may be constructed on demand, and potentially based on > > the requested properties (See Section 5.1 for more details). If > > > > Incomplete sentence. > > > We will remove "Since". > > > Section 6.2.4 > > > > multipart response. Meanwhile, for persistent ANEs whose entity > > domain name has the format of "PROPMAP.ane" where PROPMAP is the name > > of a Property Map resource, PROPMAP is the defining resource of these > > > > Is it better to say "name" of "ResourceID"? > > We propose to change the "name" to "resource ID". > > > > > > > > _______________________________________________ > > alto mailing list > > alto@ietf.org<mailto:alto@ietf.org> > > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/alto > </iesg@ietf.org<mailto:iesg@ietf.org>></noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>>
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