[alto] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-new-transport-21: (with COMMENT)

Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 02 January 2024 20:49 UTC

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Subject: [alto] Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-alto-new-transport-21: (with COMMENT)
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Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-alto-new-transport-21: No Objection

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Thank you to Donald Eastlake for the SECDIR review.

Thanks for addressing my DISCUSS feedback.

** Section 6.2.  Editorial. New text was added clarifying text to prescribe
that TIPS view URI must not be reused.  I would recommend being a clearer on
this language.

OLD
      A server MUST NOT use a URI for different TIPS views, either for
      different resources or different request bodies to the same
      resource.
NEW
A server MUST NOT use the same URI for different TIPS views, either for
different resources or different request bodies to the same      resource.

** Section 9.
   The security considerations (Section 15 of [RFC7285]) of the base
   protocol fully apply to this extension.  For example, the same
   authenticity and integrity considerations (Section 15.1 of [RFC7285])
   still fully apply;

Since ALTO TIPS is a new protocol mechanism is it possible to improve on the
TLS guidance in Section 8.3.5 of RFC7295 (from circa 2014)?  Specifically, can
RFC9325 be mandated?