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Re: [alto] Second WGLC of draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar (version -12)

Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com> Sat, 20 July 2019 03:51 UTC

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From: Jensen Zhang <jingxuan.n.zhang@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 19 Jul 2019 23:50:45 -0400
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To: Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [alto] Second WGLC of draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar (version -12)
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Hi all,

I reviewed the whole diff of the cost calendar draft between version -11
and version -12. The modification looks good to me. I only have one small
suggestion:

In the new section 2.1 "Terminology":

o  Calendar, Cost Calendar: When used with a capital "C", these terms

   refer to an ALTO Cost Calendar.


'with a capital "C"' may be confusing here. Because the first letters
of both "Cost" and "Calendar" are 'C'.  People may think "Cost
calendar" is also a term. Maybe "with capitalized words" is better?


Thanks,
Jensen


On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 3:10 PM Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com>
wrote:

> One major correction:
>
> s/The current WGLC will be open until Jul-12-2019/The current WGLC will be
> open until Jul-21-2019/
>
> The current WGLC will proceed until Jul-21-2019.
>
> Thanks.
>
> On Fri, Jul 5, 2019 at 1:53 PM Vijay Gurbani <vijay.gurbani@gmail.com
> <vijay..gurbani@gmail.com>> wrote:
>
>> All: The chairs will like to start a second WGLC for
>> draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-12 [0].
>>
>> During the first WGLC, a couple of discusses were raised as documented in
>> [1].  More specifically,
>>
>> 1/ Ben indicated a couple of edge cases that need to be resolved.
>> 2/ Alvaro noted that there is IPR tied to the precursor of this draft, as
>> detailed in [2].  The chairs will like to ensure that the WG is aware of
>> the IPR declaration inherited by draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar, and duly
>> considers it during the second WGLC.
>>
>> Version -12 of the document (the one being WGLC'd) addresses the IESG
>> discusses and comments, as well as a review by one of the chairs (Vijay).
>>
>> The current WGLC will be open until Jul-12-2019 (the start of the IETF
>> week).  Please post your comments on this draft to the WG mailing list,
>> even if the comment is simply to say that you support (or not) moving this
>> work ahead.
>>
>> The chairs  will summarize the status of the draft at the end of WGLC
>> period.
>>
>> [0] https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar-12
>> [1]
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar/ballot/
>> [2]
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/search/?submit=draft&id=draft-ietf-alto-cost-calendar
>>
>> Thank you.
>>
>> - vijay
>>
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