Re: [ANCP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-ancp-mc-extensions-11.txt

[Tom Taylor <[e-mail]>]

This update was to fix a few nits. In the process, I noted that IEEE 
*tutorials* on 48-bit and 64-bit MAC addresses had been classified as 
Normative and moved them to the Informative section. This could be 
argued, since the formats themselves are mandatory to implement. I'll 
move them back or find appropriate normative references if people think 
I should.

I also deleted a speculative note on error return codes as proposed in 
what is now an old and abandoned MBONED draft (draft-morin-mboned-...), 
along with the reference.

The final significant change was to upgrade the copyright statement to 
the latest version.

Purely editorial changes were to fix long lines in Figure 21 and change 
the multicast group addresses in the examples in the appendix to use 
example subnet 233.252.0.0/24.

FYI there was one totally spurious nit complaining about possible 
non-documentation IPv4 address 3.4.2.3. The previous text read:
  "... Sections 3.4.1 and 3.4.2.3 ...". It appears IDnits recognizes the 
Section keyword, because when I changed the text to: "... Section 3.4.1 
and Section 3.4.2.3 ..." the warning went away.

Tom Taylor

On 13/11/2013 10:34 PM, [e-mail] wrote:
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>   This draft is a work item of the Access Node Control Protocol Working Group of the IETF.
>
> 	Title           : Multicast Control Extensions for ANCP
> 	Author(s)       : Francois Le Faucheur
>                            Roberta Maglione
>                            Tom Taylor
...