Re: [Anima] WGLC on draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-12 - Respond by October 28th, 2017,

[Brian E Carpenter <[e-mail]>]

Here's my first comment on this draft. However, it is very long and I hope you can allow some extra delay.

As far as the two GRASP objectives are concerned, both "AN_ACP" and "SRV.est"
look mainly OK and I have made a demonstration implementation of both of them.
For example, the ASA pretending to be an established ACP node says things like:
 Flooding AN_ACP 17 500 and SRV.est 6 83
and the ASA pretending to be a new ACP node trying to join says things like:
 Found 1 result(s) for SRV.est 
 SRV.est with locator fe80::c0da:ac17:5f6d:8e76 6 83 expiry 30693 
 Found 2 result(s) for AN_ACP 
 AN_ACP with locator fe80::c0da:ac17:5f6d:8e76 17 500 expiry 30693 
 AN_ACP with locator fe80::c0da:ac17:5f6d:8e76 17 504 expiry 30753

I haven't uploaded this code to GitHub yet because it needs more testing.

I do have a question about the value field of each of these objectives.
They are both defined as "name of the (list of) of supported protocols"
but the examples show a simple string. That needs to be more precise.
Is it a string, a list of strings ["abc", "def"] or something else?
And do the names need to be registered?

That covers about 2 pages. I need a little more time for the other 104 pages.

Regards
   Brian

On 15/10/2017 21:59, Sheng Jiang wrote:
> Hi all,
> 
> This message starts the two-week ANIMA Working Group Last Call to advance draft-ietf-anima-autonomic-control-plane-12, An Autonomic Control Plane (ACP). This document's intended status is Standards Track. At present, there is one IPR file against this document, see below link.
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/ipr/2407/
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> Please send your comments by October 28th, 2017. If you do not feel this  document should advance, please state your reasons why.
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> Sheng JIANG is the assigned document shepherd.
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> Regards,
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> Sheng (co-chair, Toerless who as a co-author stayed neutral on the content side)
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