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Re: [Anima] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra-28

tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> Tue, 29 October 2019 09:44 UTC

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From: tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com>
To: Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
CC: Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in>, Dan Romascanu <dromasca@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra.all@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-anima-bootstrapping-keyinfra.all@ietf.org>, "anima@ietf.org" <anima@ietf.org>, Last Call <last-call@ietf.org>
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seeing if I can switch from ietf to Last Call
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Tom Petch

----- Original Message -----
From: "Michael Richardson" <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca>
Sent: Monday, October 28, 2019 10:06 PM

> tom petch <daedulus@btconnect.com> wrote:
>     > Looking some more at this I-D, I have more concerns about the
YANG
>     > module. My review is informal - I recommend that the WG Chair
request a
>     > formal review because I may be missing something particularly in
>     > connection with the 'refine' statements.
>
>     > The I-D has namespace
>     > "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-voucher-request"; prefix
"vch";
>     > whereas RFC8366, which it augments, has namespace
>     > "urn:ietf:params:xml:ns:yang:ietf-voucher"; prefix vch;
Different
>     > module, same prefix; this contradicts a SHOULD NOT in RFC8407.
>
> okay, so I shoudl change it to "vcr" for VouCher Request then?
> I think that this will have affects on the constrained-voucher
document, but
> that is easily fixed.

I would go for 'vchr' since voucher is 'vch' in RFC8366 and 'r' can then
mean request. but then the voucher extension is 'vcj'.  So, just a
personal preference for 'vchr'; else ok for this e-mail

Tom Petch

>     > Further, this I-D defines import ietf-voucher { prefix v; i.e.
does not
>     > use the prefix defined in RFC8366.  This contradicts a MUST in
RFC8407.
>
> okay, got it, fixed it.
>
>     > There is a discrepancy between the e-mail addresses of the
authors of
>     > the YANG module and of the I-D, for
>     > Author: Kent Watsen Author:
>
> Fixed.
>
>     > Toerless Eckert I note that the e-mail addresses for the YANG
module
>     > are the same as those for the YANG module in RFC8366; I do not
know
>     > which are correct.
>
> People moved to different companies since publication :-)
>
>     >   contact "WG Web: <http://tools.ietf.org/wg/anima/> should be
https:
>     > and usually points to datatracker.ietf.org not tools
>
> Fixed.
>
> --
> Michael Richardson <mcr+IETF@sandelman.ca>, Sandelman Software Works
>  -= IPv6 IoT consulting =-

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