Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-06.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Thu, 27 January 2022 02:16 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-06.txt
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Hi,

This version aims to respond to all IESG comments, including the two DISCUSS comments.

Regards
    Brian Carpenter

On 27-Jan-22 15:10, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach WG of the IETF.
> 
>          Title           : Guidelines for Autonomic Service Agents
>          Authors         : Brian Carpenter
>                            Laurent Ciavaglia
>                            Sheng Jiang
>                            Pierre Peloso
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-06.txt
> 	Pages           : 30
> 	Date            : 2022-01-26
> 
> Abstract:
>     This document proposes guidelines for the design of Autonomic Service
>     Agents for autonomic networks.  Autonomic Service Agents, together
>     with the Autonomic Network Infrastructure, the Autonomic Control
>     Plane and the Generic Autonomic Signaling Protocol constitute base
>     elements of an autonomic networking ecosystem.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines/
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> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-06.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-asa-guidelines-06
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