Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-12.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Thu, 18 May 2017 23:30 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-12.txt
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Hi,

This version is intended to deal with the IESG comments and late reviews so far.

The changes are:

 Clarified that GRASP runs in a single addressing realm
 Improved wording about FQDN resolution, clarified that URI usage is out of scope.
 Clarified description of negotiation timeout.
 Noted that 'dry run' semantics are ASA-dependent.
 Made the ACP a normative reference.
 Clarified that LL multicasts are limited to GRASP interfaces.
 Unicast UDP moved out of scope.

Note that there is one idnits warning:
Downref: Normative reference to an Informational draft: draft-greevenbosch-appsawg-cbor-cddl
which is expected to become standards track in the CBOR WG.

Regards
   Brian

On 19/05/2017 11:18, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : A Generic Autonomic Signaling Protocol (GRASP)
>         Authors         : Carsten Bormann
>                           Brian Carpenter
>                           Bing Liu
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-grasp-12.txt
> 	Pages           : 78
> 	Date            : 2017-05-18
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document establishes requirements for a signaling protocol that
>    enables autonomic nodes and autonomic service agents to dynamically
>    discover peers, to synchronize state with them, and to negotiate
>    parameter settings with them.  The document then defines a general
>    protocol for discovery, synchronization and negotiation, while the
>    technical objectives for specific scenarios are to be described in
>    separate documents.  An Appendix briefly discusses existing protocols
>    with comparable features.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-grasp/
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> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
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