[Anima] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14

[Ines Robles via Datatracker <[e-mail]>]

Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review result: Almost Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-anima-constrained-join-proxy-14
Reviewer: Ines Robles
Review Date: 2023-09-06
IETF LC End Date: 2022-04-08
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:

This document extends the work of Bootstrapping Remote Secure Key
Infrastructures (BRSKI) by replacing the Circuit-proxy between Pledge and
Registrar by a stateless/stateful constrained Join Proxy. This document defines
a protocol to securely assign a Pledge to a domain, represented by a Registrar,
using an intermediary node between Pledge and Registrar.

The document is well written.

There are 12 github issues open with this draft.
https://github.com/anima-wg/constrained-join-proxy/issues I understand that the
document is currently being modified to address them, I am willing to review
also the corrected version.

Thanks for this document,

Ines.