Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-10.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Fri, 10 March 2017 03:02 UTC

Return-Path: <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
X-Original-To: anima@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: anima@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 5FF641294DF for <anima@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 9 Mar 2017 19:02:12 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -2.7
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-2.7 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, DKIM_SIGNED=0.1, DKIM_VALID=-0.1, DKIM_VALID_AU=-0.1, FREEMAIL_FROM=0.001, RCVD_IN_DNSWL_LOW=-0.7, SPF_PASS=-0.001] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Authentication-Results: ietfa.amsl.com (amavisd-new); dkim=pass (2048-bit key) header.d=gmail.com
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([4.31.198.44]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id TycbT4x1lq0A for <anima@ietfa.amsl.com>; Thu, 9 Mar 2017 19:02:10 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail-pf0-x234.google.com (mail-pf0-x234.google.com [IPv6:2607:f8b0:400e:c00::234]) (using TLSv1.2 with cipher ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 (128/128 bits)) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 87F5C1294A6 for <anima@ietf.org>; Thu, 9 Mar 2017 19:02:10 -0800 (PST)
Received: by mail-pf0-x234.google.com with SMTP id v190so36206552pfb.1 for <anima@ietf.org>; Thu, 09 Mar 2017 19:02:10 -0800 (PST)
DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=gmail.com; s=20161025; h=subject:references:to:from:organization:message-id:date:user-agent :mime-version:in-reply-to:content-transfer-encoding; bh=9CRbtboXHqSm7m3Zs62x7hTo/nezwFEkDxsgFRujliY=; b=Z6gbUOuKKlg6BxchkAdyPOtthH22CmlcX9SQ1ahNRfQUkUlq5IrOJpdk+/0E2xW+oR LF6PobrZCJPNF2UAVFj2nJvcIjJ1eKb6UykMqzrqfOVL/9yVzne6lKoZfJ0PWxYXbue/ 2JlKfFh/25TR93seO3RcwYdgEt8c3PSobJLe0oLXPZSgloUxXyMG/eLXoA61QnTHVhkw MuUV5iVe4nrGov9rwK7PqrcApk+Y51UnltDoOREQP/snwbaZOUnEGy5Xh4xKroF32QjU MsfXlWNqCN2U7M2GzV1E+wy/NfjVTGVslxLewKWlAswphwumpdq4dvJ9HeyZeZ0eMiOz KKqg==
X-Google-DKIM-Signature: v=1; a=rsa-sha256; c=relaxed/relaxed; d=1e100.net; s=20161025; h=x-gm-message-state:subject:references:to:from:organization :message-id:date:user-agent:mime-version:in-reply-to :content-transfer-encoding; bh=9CRbtboXHqSm7m3Zs62x7hTo/nezwFEkDxsgFRujliY=; b=KzbTjhwW/IPyC4CfooRw4VLGOzYBO5o5DU/JOnZfm3LTZJ8MOokRYwq39+fBVpewji aWJ31Ebasia0WMz8YHDxcg3isuXPJQ9FFdh4OHP+NR1Pfn6p0t1hB778PLuKm73GiQn/ NGa+Qus93Ixacus7p3P18F9BC0EcGlYRcoBy/x7btqjTR72NhnXz/yA+n530DQPtAKgl dE0pKqYZEvLhjb9h6Tge8vf/er+3nGQLHJ+9IEscwiQ3PwqUcKha3Xr/8+zs0+SmP9Cb BZ/A0hiRSJ6UdvT3yxe0MFzXYbeiF7W1rtNiCU/IDA+GYL7n7YWbZ43Q3RItSJWrNBtI UPsw==
X-Gm-Message-State: AMke39mnN9NSD1RqqAiY0t2cleRdFlshq69K+NcogWwbZcEgVhN4WUfzZ/hi43jUX8VoRQ==
X-Received: by 10.84.129.195 with SMTP id b61mr21866481plb.83.1489114929925; Thu, 09 Mar 2017 19:02:09 -0800 (PST)
Received: from ?IPv6:2406:e007:4e09:1:28cc:dc4c:9703:6781? ([2406:e007:4e09:1:28cc:dc4c:9703:6781]) by smtp.gmail.com with ESMTPSA id y184sm15032672pgd.45.2017.03.09.19.02.08 for <anima@ietf.org> (version=TLS1_2 cipher=ECDHE-RSA-AES128-GCM-SHA256 bits=128/128); Thu, 09 Mar 2017 19:02:09 -0800 (PST)
References: <148911433290.5795.7684785232355268412@ietfa.amsl.com>
To: anima@ietf.org
From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
Organization: University of Auckland
Message-ID: <54177aa1-6f81-48fc-7cdc-298ad0bb4e70@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 10 Mar 2017 16:02:15 +1300
User-Agent: Mozilla/5.0 (Windows NT 6.1; WOW64; rv:45.0) Gecko/20100101 Thunderbird/45.8.0
MIME-Version: 1.0
In-Reply-To: <148911433290.5795.7684785232355268412@ietfa.amsl.com>
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="utf-8"
Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/anima/LrfkV0T9yejnYoXnPNfN3D0Jymc>
Subject: Re: [Anima] I-D Action: draft-ietf-anima-grasp-10.txt
X-BeenThere: anima@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.17
Precedence: list
List-Id: Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach <anima.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/anima>, <mailto:anima-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/anima/>
List-Post: <mailto:anima@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:anima-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/anima>, <mailto:anima-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Fri, 10 Mar 2017 03:02:12 -0000

Hi,

This version tries to address numerous IETF Last Call comments,
including a lot of editorial changes including clarifications
and minor reorganization. The real technical changes are these:

 Protocol change: Specify that an objective with no initial value
 should have its value field set to CBOR 'null'.

 Protocol change: Specify behavior on receiving unrecognized message
 type.

 Noted that UTF-8 objective names are matched byte-for-byte.

 Added brief guidance for Expert Reviewer of new generic objectives.

The open issues that we need to discuss in Chicago are:

63.  Should encryption be MUST instead of SHOULD in Section 3.5.1
     and Section 3.5.2.1?

64.  Should more security text be moved from the main text into
     the Security Considerations?

65.  Do we need to formally restrict Unicode characters allowed in
     objective names?

66.  Split requirements into separate document?

67.  Remove normative dependency on draft-greevenbosch-appsawg-
     cbor-cddl?

Brian + co-authors

On 10/03/2017 15:52, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Autonomic Networking Integrated Model and Approach of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : A Generic Autonomic Signaling Protocol (GRASP)
>         Authors         : Carsten Bormann
>                           Brian Carpenter
>                           Bing Liu
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-anima-grasp-10.txt
> 	Pages           : 77
> 	Date            : 2017-03-09
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document establishes requirements for a signaling protocol that
>    enables autonomic nodes and autonomic service agents to dynamically
>    discover peers, to synchronize state with them, and to negotiate
>    parameter settings with them.  The document then defines a general
>    protocol for discovery, synchronization and negotiation, while the
>    technical objectives for specific scenarios are to be described in
>    separate documents.  An Appendix briefly discusses existing protocols
>    with comparable features.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-anima-grasp/
> 
> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-anima-grasp-10
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-anima-grasp-10
> 
> 
> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of submission
> until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org.
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> 
> _______________________________________________
> I-D-Announce mailing list
> I-D-Announce@ietf.org
> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce
> Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html
> or ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt
>